Reviewer: lostfox555 Signed 9
Date: June 28, 2007
Title: Chapter 33: Afternoon Delight
I'm a very bad Dane Cook fan that I can't pick it out, but I am trying to be a good reviewer. I'm still loving this story. I loved the line, "Oh, I'm not worrying. If you weren't pregnant before, you are after last night." Honestly, that was great. I kinda hope Jim takes the job. It seems like something that should be happening for them, but I also know you won't make it easy on those two. Keep it up...I like updates!
Author's Response:
The Dane Cook line is the one about the nap/coma. It's basically DC's take on exxagerations....
And the line that you love so much was all (just sayin.) I don't always steal my material...heheh. Glad you liked it...I liked it too..:)
Keep reading and reviewing.