Penname: Azlin Real name:
Member Since: March 14, 2007

Bio:

I recently graduated from college and now work as an editor for a local publishing house.

I know my writing isn't anywhere close to brilliant, but I've decided to put it out there anyway, hoping that it will brighten someone's day, even if it's just my own.


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West by unfold Rated: T [Reviews - 20] 21
Summary: Written for the Road Trip challenge. "And he doesn’t ask questions now when they’re more than 400 miles into this trip and he still has no idea where he’s going."


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Travel
Warnings: None
Challenges: Road Trip
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3326 Read Count: 2961 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2006 Updated: July 15, 2006
Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. This was fantastic. I just got back from a really emotional road trip of my own and this was just so perfect. Thank you for writing it!

Summary:

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3965 Read Count: 3679 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2006 Updated: September 19, 2006
Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: April 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

So I know this old, but I'm just now going back through a bunch of your stuff, some of which I read back in the day when I was an anonymous lurker, but I just wanted to say that this was really great. And I'm a big fan of yours. :)

Crash Into Me by oypoodle Rated: T [Reviews - 10] 8
Summary: “How long have you been sick?” She stops when she feels his hand on her back between her shoulder blades. She slouches forward and her chin falls to her chest. “Two months.” She whispers.

Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Oneshot, Hurt/Comfort
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1131 Read Count: 5004 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2006 Updated: November 08, 2006
Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: June 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Um...so I know this is super old, but I just came across it, and really loved it. Nice job with the details and the hitting me in the grief bone thing.

Also, just out of curiosity, is your username a Gilmore Girls reference? Because if it is, that'd be really cool. 

Eggshells by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 35] 25
Summary: Pam tries to explain her choices to the biggest JAM fan there is.
Categories: Future, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Other, Roy
Genres: Married
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1306 Read Count: 3928 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2006 Updated: December 08, 2006
Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: July 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was fantastic the first time I read it (back when I was a lurker.) And it's still great now. Great job! I love this story because it's such an original idea, and you really get to hear it from Pam's point of view. I kind of wish that things with Karen had ended that way, because I would've loved to have seen that on screen! Anyway, thanks for writing this!

Author's Response:

Ah, poor Karen. Yeah, it would have been fun! Sadly, I'm not that good of a fortune teller. I'm so glad you still enjoyed it on a second reading! That's very encouraging, heh. Happy Belated Birthday!

Unspoken by applepear Rated: K+ [Reviews - 4] 3
Summary:

When it comes to taking that four steps forward, the best way to do it is Unspoken.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 565 Read Count: 1883 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2006 Updated: December 22, 2006
Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: April 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: [1] Unspoken

I really enjoyed this. I love the mix of poetry and narrative it's quite unusual but very refreshing. I hope you'll post more!

Summary: It's 1954, Dunder-Mifflin's brand new office has opened and a handsome young man is in charge...and he's falling for the switchboard operator. Super AU
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Challenges: You Don't Know Me, Another Decade
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 11248 Read Count: 46044 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2007 Updated: May 04, 2009
Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: May 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Red Lipstick

Yayayayayay!!! Imagine me saying this about 50,000 more times and then you'll get an idea of how excited I was to see a new chapter!

And it was totally great too! I was too distracted by the content to look for grammar errors, so I don't have any to point out, but maybe I'll notice some on a second read-through. For now, just, thanks for updating! :D

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: July 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Merry Christmas

Nice! I like the changes you made! Thanks for letting me beta! ;)

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: December 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Blue Dress

Yay!!! I was so surprised and excited to see an update for this story. I was worried you'd just leave us hanging, so thanks for updating and thanks for a really, really good chapter. It was everything I love best about this story. So old-fashioned, but still so them. The pics were great too! I can totally picture Pam in that dress and with her hair done like that. In fact, now I'm thinking Jenna Fischer ought to try that for the red carpet sometime. Like totally vintage. Um, anyway, this was a fabulous chapter and I'm really glad you didn't disappear for good!

Summary:

Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.


Categories: Other, Present
Characters: Angela, Karen, Kelly, Meredith, Pam, Phyllis
Genres: Humor, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 84 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 109602 Read Count: 338200 ePub Downloads: 39
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2007 Updated: October 22, 2007
Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: April 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54 - Gay Gigolo Spotted at Local Hotel

lol! I don't think it was a concussion, but I've definitely had a killer headache all day. Luckily, fanfic was the perfect cure. Seriously, we should start selling this stuff as painkillers on the black market. Thanks for your concern though! It was a lot better than the several people who laughed at me all day because I was wearing a really big bandage that covered half my forehead. By the end of the day I was considering just writing the word LOSER across it in really big letters.

Oh, and Pam's Dwight prank was sheer genius. She really can think on her feet, that one. ;)



Author's Response: Okay if a person has a bandage on their HEAD that's not funny. Wrapped around their body like a mummy, yes. Head, no. You need to show all these lame people The Injury so they can see the dangers of a concussion... as well as the dangers of a George Foreman grill. Also anyone who sustains a Dwight Head Injury is not a LOSER! Notice how little face time Jim got with Pam. Moral - Head Injury = Ladies' Man! I am glad you're feeling better. I recommend reading more Fanfic!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: October 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 84: Chapter 84 - Pam's slave for all eternity

Y!A!Y! I couldn't even! finish a word! without! pausing! to put in! some exclamation points!!!! That's how excited I am about the fact that there's a new chapter of girly-girl! I seriously don't know how you do it, but this just keeps getting better and better and better and better and better and better and better!! I love Roy's new storyline and the cute Jam. Plus this story now has a nostalgic feeling to it, like oh yeah, I remember when Kevin got those Krispy Kremes and Michael got bailed out of jail all those many months ago. :) And Jim and Karen are still a thing. And Roy is clueless. Good times, good times. Well, okay, so some of those were angsty times on the show, but in girly-girl it was all fodder for fun and giggles. Which is yet another thing I love about you. The angst into hilarity factor is always very high for your stories. Okay, I feel like I'm just rambling now, but it's been so long since I've gotten to review girly-girl that I had all kinds of pent up reviews just waiting to be unleashed and finally having the opportunity is just dawesome! Anyway, carry on... ;)

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: September 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 83: Not a chapter - just a little recap to bring everyone up to speed

You tease! Still, I'm glad to see you haven't given up on this story yet. And the recap was actually very helpful. Anyway, I'm still super glad you're back! Can't wait to see what you have planned for these guys! You rock, Muggins!

And I'm guessing Jim's giving Pam a foot massage. I mean, what else would make her say those things, right?

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: June 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 81 - Jim's Dream Date (Kinda Lame)

hahaha! I love Jim's ideal date. Although there were a couple of moments when my jaw dropped because Jim failed to cross out a "you" or "Pam." Of course, I should have known that he wouldn't actually send it that way, but still...

Author's Response: I can't wait for him to ask Pam about her dream date. That's one that I'm forcing myself, forcing myself to hold off on, because it is Sooooo good!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: June 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 79: Chapter 79 - Three Fuzzy Navels later....

:D I should really think of something original to say, but I just woke up, and there's nothing in my brain yet. So instead I'll give you lots of unoriginal stuff:

I really liked this. This is such a good story. I love Jim and Pam. I want more of this fic NOW!!! You are such a good writer. Everything about this chapter made me laugh. LOL!!! Great stuff! Nice job! You rock, Muggins! Keep writing, I can't wait to find out what happens! Woohoo!!!! Yay!!! I love girly-girl. Thanks for writing this. You win at life. ;)



Author's Response: Original reply: Hi! Good morning! Did you sleep well? Would you like some cocoa? Please, have some pancakes. They're lingonberry. What the heck is a lingonberry anyway? Have to go research that. Be right back... Ciao!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: June 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 77: Chapter 77 - Jim meets Mr. Filippelli

Nice Muggins! But I have to admit I'm a little sad that Jim and Pam don't get to sit in the conference room holding hands and such anymore. However, I might be less disappointed if I knew they were going to exchange hand-holding for more "exciting" activities. (Or in other words kiss, kiss, kiss, kiss...*continues chanting*) Just sayin.

Author's Response: Hey, the kids have to eat. Let them go eat. You don't want them to die of starvation do you? *picks up chant* "Kiss, Kiss, KISS" (Are you listening, Greg Daniels?)

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: June 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 76: Chapter 76 - Do NOT Stand Next to a Schrute During a Flash Flood

Okay, at this point I would pay an insane amount of money to see the Jim/Pam/Dwight scene acted out on my television. I LOVED all the hand holding and the little gestures. So cute. Plus, you know, Dwight's there being Dwight so obviously that's a major bonus! :) Seriously though, I'm loving all the Jam in the last few chapters!

Author's Response: I so wish I had any filmmaking skills whatsoever because there are so many scenes. Hiring - Tall, lanky, green-eyed guy with flippy hair. I especially would like to film the visual ones like all the MTT Smut. All of them. Starting with 'A' and working my way to 'Z'.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: June 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 75 - Too Horny Pam

Yes! Jim's hands on Pam's hips, Creed's last line, and Meredith up to no good. These are a few of my favorite things! It's so good to have you back Muggins!

Author's Response: Sound of Music meets 'The Office'.... Pam would be just the sweetest Maria ever. Karen would be great as the elegant rival. Imagine her in ballgowns! Dwight would be the Nazi kid. Oddly enough, I know the Nazi kid's cousin. She says he sells hot tubs in Hollywood now. So there you go!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed 9
Date: June 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 74: Chapter 74 - Pam bats her eyelashes. As does Dwight.

YES!!! I'm so glad Girly-girl is back. And what an awesome chapter to get us back into it. Jim and Pam as Dwight's future in-laws is hysterical! Not to mention that they get to stare at each other through batted eye-lashes. I also loved Meredith's first line "your stomach can cushion the blow"! Awesome!

Author's Response:

*Bows*
Glad to be back. Missed everyone exceedingly. Have to get a hanky. I'm getting all clempt.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: May 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 72: Chapter 72 - Codpieces and Crullers

Beautiful. This is amazing, as usual. I LOVED the JHalpert & PBeesly emails. Those two could flirt with each other for another 150 chapters and it would never get old, but having Dwight in a pirate costume makes it even better!

Author's Response: I think if I had them flirt for another 150 chapters everyone would shoot me since they all want some JAM action. Sadly, I think I could write another 150 chapters of flirting no problemo because, truth be told, I only know two synonyms for nipple. Thus my Jam action would last like 20 lines and then THE END.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: May 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 70: Chapter 70 - Team Building Exercises

Woo-hoo! Girly-girl! And Pam growling? Awesome! I seriously love where this is going. Or where I think it's going, that is.

I loved Pam's post-it too!!! And Michael's idea of the treasures he's going to be getting. :) And Meredith on the phone with Stacy! Yikes. Poor Angela if she and Stacy ever meet up... And poor Toby, I hate when I'm driving people around and they pick music I don't like!

Okay. Anyways, the whole thing's great!



Author's Response: I dumped a boyfriend once because he always changed the presets on my radio. And I don't own a car. This was in my apartment! It's disconcerting to turn on the radio while you're cooking pasta and hit *1* and suddenly Black Sabbath is playing when you were expecting Blossom Dearie. However I did grow to appreciate the distinction between Guns N Roses and Motley Crüe (two bands that I previously used to get confused) so I didn't walk away from that relationship without growing as a human being. Right? 

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: May 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 66: Chapter 66 - I promise it won't hurt

Yes!!! This review basically concludes all the catching up I've had to do since being gone for a week or two, and believe me when I say there's been a lot of it, but it was totally worth it all for the happy Jam. Especially the scenes in these last few chapters!

I love that this story is 66 chapters long and I'm still so smitten with it. Thanks Muggins!



Author's Response: God, I'm so glad you're back. I've missed you terribly. I hate that everyone has these real lives that interfere with the truly important things. But what can I do? Maybe you could get a job as a professional reviewer. The pays not great but you get to snort and spit out a lot of food while reading... surely that compensates for the crappy salary?

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: April 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 58: Chapter 58 - Evening with the Boys

Oh that was amazing! Dwight and Mose together in public, and with Pam's falsetto? Awesome. Just made my very early Saturday morning so much nicer!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: March 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 - Stanley the Cat-Napper

I'm at work and I've already been caught smiling unreasonably at my screen a few times because of this story. You are fiend! But I love it!

Author's Response: Thank you. I've never been called a 'fiend' before. That's...wow. That's kind of sweet.

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: March 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43 - Michael: A blue ladybug

Awesome as always! I'm especially happy that Dwight finally gets to date his girlfriend in public. Poor guy!

Author's Response: You're not as happy as Dwight is!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: March 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 - Love with De-Fanged Snakes

Aaagh!!!! Jim is evil! But hilariously so. This story just keeps getting better and better.

Author's Response: Evil? BWAHAHAHA! Wait until Creed gets to do his dare against Meredith! WOOHOO! Then you will be seeing some EVIL!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed
Date: April 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53 - Poor Dwight. Poor, poor Dwight.

Okay. So yesterday I sustained a massive injury to the head. Well, when I say massive what I mean is something fell on me and scraped my forehead... but anyways, I was lying on the couch icing my wound and the whole time all I could hear was Michael's phone call from The Injury and "alternate with heat, sweetie." I guess in my weakened state my mind automatically turned to the comforting world of Girly-girl. :)

Oh, and this last chapter was awesome!



Author's Response: OH MY GOD! You could have a concussion!!! Quick, when you typed this review did you originally type, "Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin, Azlin? Because if you did I think you might need to go to the hospital. And only for bruising do you alternate with heat, sweetie! If you actually got blood developing then you want moisture, as in a cool rag and some hydrogen peroxide and some neosporin, sweetie! What fell on you? A meteorite? Because you have less chance of being attacked by wolves than of being hit by a meteorite.