Reviewer: jillyree Signed 10
July 03, 2007
Chapter 1: the deep end...
I can't remember if I have reviewed this story or not, but I know that I had started reading it when it was still only a few chapters in, and then lost it.
I have to tell you that to me, a good story immediately pulls me out of my reality and into the story, where it seems that I'm living in it as a secondary character who is never mentioned. This story has done just that. Your writing style is beautiful, and GAH! You had Jim kiss her gently on the neck, which just melts me! This is wonderful,and I wish I could give you an "11" rating.
BRAVO!Author's Response: Wow! That is such a great compliment. I'm so glad you've enjoyed the story. I'd definitely give your review an 11 rating. Of course, that might be a little weird since it's all about me. Seriously though, thank you. I really do appreciate it! :)