Jim and Pam's first date, using the constraints of the 55 word challenge.
10 A two word review:
Absolute. Perfection.
It's about damn time -- not only for Pam & Jim to go on a date, but for me to get in on this whole fanfic writing thing. I hear it's the next big thing. 8 Moxie didn't lie! This was GREAT! (You better make sure she gets me my free gift!!)
Author's Response:
Hey, Jilly, she left that gift with me actually. But I think I want to keep it for myself.
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Jim/Pam - The Job onwards. Going through the motions. 8 I can tell by the title you're a John Mayer fan...and the first italicized paragraph confirmed it. This is a gorgeous story. I really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Ah, your music taste FTW. Thank you so much. :D I loved writing this story, and I was hoping the feelings would transfer!
A series of vignettes inspired by random song clips from the iPod. No chronological order, so sit tight. It might be a bumpy ride through time.10 A story that combines two of my favorite things...JAM and DMB. You are a goddess, you know this, right? And you are soooo right, Crush IS the Jam Anthem, alright.
A thousand schrute bucks to you...
10 I've never wanted to go to Las Vegas so much in my life. Think Pam will let me borrow Jim to accompany me?
This chapter was HOT STUFF. Can't wait for more.
9 Best use of an airport delay. Ever.
Glad to hear that you're finally in the air!
9 Oh, this is so very good...I can only imagine what the next two sleepless nights will be!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy them as well.
Oh, so sweeeeet - I'm in love with this story!
Author's Response: And it loves you back! Thank you so much!!
9 Wow...hot stuff indeed! I particularly enjoyed the new rules of jinx. Very interesting, indeed!
10 Soooo cute and adorable and everything great! [/kelly]
You were wrong about the sex. Not about how great it would be, no, but how you would stop being consumed with thoughts of her 24 hours a day once you could be with her.
10 And you expect me to sleep after reading THIS?!?!?
Not gonna happen. WOW. Just, um...wow. [/jim]
Wheee! jillyree, I had to get up and get out of the house for a couple hours in the middle of writing this to clear my own head! So pleased you liked this and I hope you eventually got some good, dream-filled sleep. Thank you!
When everything reminds you of the past, it is best to embrace it.
9 I just got the chance to read this entire story and wanted you to know that the use of the prompts was WONDERFUL. Great little read!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have a new baby so I haven't been writing anything, but it's good to know that my former efforts are still being enjoyed!
9 Haha! This was devilishly good! You deserve a Tiny Dundie for this!
10 Do we want to hear more about Jim's sexcapades in college?
Pardon my language, but HELL YEAH, WE DO!
This story rocks my socks.
10 Two words: Absolute Perfection.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad that you liked the story. Also, thanks for reviewing jillyree.
10 How much do I love the fact that there's a Holly fic? Like, so much! THis was great, and it was good to see you flesh out her character a little more. And, adding Kevin and his "mental illness" into the mix just scored you bonus points!
Author's Response: Thank you! Is it wrong if I say Holly\'s kind of already my favorite female character? Obviously we\'ve got to wait until S5, but... ahh, she rocks!
10 Good Lord, Woman! If this is what happens when you're about to go on vacation, I think you need to just retire and vacation all the time!
Can we get a ribbon for this woman and this story? I have to actually to SLEEP after reading this? WOW...just WOW!
A colorful look at the evolution of Pam and Jim's relationship.10 “ ‘A violet by a mossy stone, half hidden from the eye,’ ” he whispered, his lips skating over my neck, lingering over the juncture where my jaw met my ear. “ ‘Fair as a star, when only one is shining in the sky.’ ”
OMG..that just...wow. This story was excellent, Callisto, and I am so proud that you wrote it.
10 I love it. I mean LOVE. IT.
Author's Response: Thanks jilly! :)
Cinderella meets Groundhog Day meets Dr. Gregory House. Pam will never be the same. (Set during S3's Ben Franklin.)10 Ah...I've only watched a couple of episodes of House, but I LOVE this story. Moxie, you've got another winner on your hands.
(or, Everyone Else Wrote It, Why Can't I?) If you aren't sick to death of tales about such an historic event, here's one more version - told to you by the daters themselves.10 This is absolutely wonderful, and I cannot wait to read more, STAT! Stat means now!
Really, this is a great story and I'm loving the two points of view.
9 I'm loving this story! So original, and I actually laughed out loud at a couple of the talking heads.
Only one complaint: The link to Jim's Playlist doesn't work, and I'm DYING to know what songs he has on there!! Please let me know!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I keep you laughing...arrogant as it sounds, I crack myself with this story a lot. :) And the playlist link is fixed for Chapter Three, so do try again - I really love it and think it captures \"my\" Jim perfectly!
OMG! I just have to say...how much do I love that Jim has both The Muppets, The Beatles, George Michael AND Tom Petty on his vacation playlist? Oh yeah, and the chapter was great! I too, am a Disney-aholic (my sister and her family are there right now) and am ejnoying this story immensely as I can "see" it all in my minds eye!
Author's Response: The playlist is pretty great...I know that sounds arrogant, but c\'mon - Jim can put a list together! :) So glad you\'re enjoying the story! :)
9 Wow...the description of their "interlude" was just amazing. I'll never be able to look at Jim's desk the same way again. But the ending? So sad for poor Jim.
Author's Response: Yeah, Jim takes a lot of abuse! :)\r\n\r\nThanks for your review!