1 [Report This]Date: December 05, 2020 02:20 pm Title: Looking Deeper
Well, that got appropriately nasty. And adding Danny into this is an interesting choice. This has been a pretty topsy turvy night for these poor kids.
Author's Response: Yeah, break-ups usually aren't the best of situations for anyone involved. You're right about their night.
Date: May 09, 2020 08:48 am Title: Looking Deeper
yikes that one hell of a Kelly backstory to explain her season 1 to season 3 character flip
Author's Response: Yeah I'm not really sure where that came from. Sometimes ideas just pop out as I write them and that seemed to fit. Thanks for all the comments.
1 [Report This]Date: April 05, 2019 08:43 pm Title: Looking Deeper
Lots of Danny on the archive recently...lol.
I like how you did this, though dang that makes Karen seem awful. Which I suppose was always going to happen with the last cliffhanger. Lovely job with this, and I really am enjoying the cliffhanger an episode style.
Author's Response: Yeah, I'm not a fan of Karen. Thanks for the feedback on the cliffhangers. After this many in a row part of me was thinking they were starting to get old. Glad to know people are still enjoying the.
1 [Report This]Date: April 05, 2019 08:26 pm Title: Looking Deeper
This is fun! I feel like it's a challenge to see how many characters can be involved while keeping the story flowing in a straightforward way.
Author's Response: It is challenging that's for sure. Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
1 [Report This]Date: April 05, 2019 06:51 pm Title: Looking Deeper
Lol! This is priceless!
Author's Response: Thanks. Like I said the ending was kind of a whim so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
1 [Report This]Date: April 05, 2019 03:35 pm Title: Looking Deeper
Hahahahaha Now Danny??? These cliffhanger endings are awesome!
Author's Response: Why thank you. It's been fun to come up with them.