Monday, the soda machine gave me grape water instead of Sprite. And my first thought was about Jim, and his evolving. And I was like, hum, interesting middle ground for Jim, Grape Water. And then I tasted it. It tasted like water, but it had the smell of cold medicine. And it wasn't cool at all. So, I wouldn't wish that on Jim.
And I just think this is the coolest metaphor (or whatever the correct term) is! It is so awesome

Very interesting.  I like these lines best: "It was the flaws in evolution that really mattered. Those flaws created the anomalies, the loch ness monsters, the things people really talked about. The smallest cracks in the evolutionary chart made the largest difference, and you noticed every one."

I also really like this: "You want Jim, even though you already caught him, and threw him back in." I hope they catch each other again, and soon!

I'm interested in seeing the other views on Jim. 

WOO!  I'm so glad that someone did an evolution story.  Literally.  Good job on not making it cheesy but realistic.