I wrote a story about 'Hot Girl' from Pam's perspective - it's called "Right?". If you're looking for ideas on perspectives you should check it out. I really liked what you did for basketball about Pam not even knowing what it means to check out someone anymore haha.

Author's Response: Hey!  Thanks for the review.  I definitely just went and checked out your story.  I really liked it.  It was very "Pam."  I just want it to be real.  She can't be thinking her Season 3 emotions in season 1.  I'm glad you liked this chapter.  I always liked that look she gave Jim after he ran by her.  I also always liked the contrast between Jim and Roy in that game.  They are both obviously competitive but Roy is aggressive and gets angry and ignores Pam while Jim is taking the hits, dishing it out, being a good sport and totally noticing Pam.