Date: February 08, 2008 10:22 pm Title: Moments last....
Awww tulips are my favorite flower, so I loved this chapter. And Jim's message was really sweet. =)
Date: February 03, 2008 07:33 am Title: Moments last....
I've really enjoyed this story! I especially like your idea of Jim thinking of the yogurt lid to bring to her (oh that blessed yogurt lid!).
Oh and I loved this line because it is SO TRUE:
"Flowers always have a meaning. Get her the wrong ones and you could be telling her that she smells like rotten cheese.:
Hehe!
Nicely done, I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I am really glad you like it so far! Hopefully I will get the next chapter up soon.
8 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2008 07:02 am Title: Moments last....
I'm enjoying this story a lot - can't wait for the next chapter, but the last line? "It's our turn" is way, WAY cheesier than "You're the only one for me". Maybe its because I'm a guy or not American or something but that made me cringe! Don't worry though, its still a good story so no offense.
Author's Response: Every line I thought of was cheesy! Trust me....I tried like 50 different things and they were all cheesy!! Finally I just picked one and went with it!!
Date: February 01, 2008 05:27 am Title: Moments last....
aww loved it...i am loving jim more and more and i didn't think that was possible!! i don't quite understand jon's part in the story...is he just a filler character or is he going to have a bigger part?? just wondering!! can't wait for more
Author's Response: Jon is Jim's brother. He's mostly just a filler. I thought that Jim needed someone to be there for him. He might come back for a little bit, but I don't know.
Date: January 31, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Moments last....
I love this story! It's so great! Totally weird about the grocery store...I live in Scranton and I have never in my life seen or heard of Scott's! I even googled it!! lol
Author's Response: It's a real place right!?!?! I mapquested it and everything!!