Date: February 08, 2008 10:28 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
Aww, how sweet. I love how Jim is getting along with Pam's parents and how much they like him. Not to be nitpicky, but I think Jim put Andy's calculator in Jello, not stapler (that was what he did to Dwight). =)
Author's Response: Your right! It was the calculator!! Thanks! I will fix that! Thanks for your comments! I really appreciate them!!
Date: February 03, 2008 05:41 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
holy crap! way to leave a cliffhanger
Author's Response: Is that a good thing or a bad thing?? I hope you like the story! Don't worry the next chapter will be up soon!!
Date: February 02, 2008 12:45 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
omg yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.
And that was my 13 year old girl moment. Thanks.
Author's Response: Haha! Glad you like it!!
9 [Report This]Date: February 02, 2008 08:29 am Title: I can stay right here forever...
Ahh! Cliffhanger! The story continues to be awesome!! And I checked online too, and yes Scott's is a real place. I am just apparently not very observant! =)
Date: February 02, 2008 06:49 am Title: I can stay right here forever...
This is a beautiful story. Jim getting help picking out flowers for their meaning brought a beautiful picture to my mind and the hospital terrace overlooking the city did, too. Hopefully Jim will be able to take Pam out there to see the view soon. And Jim silently getting lost in his thoughts and tears out there... that was such a poignant and heartfelt scene and totally believable. When I read this part, I was wishing Jenn would come out there and catch him crying and hold him like only a mother can to comfort and reassure him, but that probably wouldn't have been as realistic as Rick being the one. One last thing, I like the way Karen bowed out gracefully, finally understanding the connection Jim and Pam have with one another. Your ending of this chapter was great and I can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! I really liked your comments on the different thigns that happend. The next chapter should be up soon!!
Date: February 01, 2008 08:40 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
oh my god.
you WOULD end a chapter like that!
It was beautiful,
so hurry & put the next one up, okay?
good.
glad we got that taken care of.
:)
Author's Response: Haha! Sorry! It's just seemed like a good ending point! Don't worry! The next chapter is on it's way!
10 [Report This]Date: February 01, 2008 04:25 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
This chapter was beautiful! Looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you!! It shouldn't be too long.
Date: February 01, 2008 04:24 pm Title: I can stay right here forever...
oh yay...pam is finally awake...can't wait to see what happens now with her and him!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!