Date: March 31, 2007 02:27 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Oh, wow, this is a powerful chapter. I love it! I'm excited for the next one. Aaaand... awesome that you mentioned House. It's a great chapter! -runs off to reread it-
Date: March 31, 2007 02:14 pm Title: Shall I say, I have gone at dusk through narrow streets
Yikes! Did Squirrel piss Pam off or what? It's a good thing though. They each need to get all that crap off their chest. Even if Pam doesn't know she is getting it off her chest to the right person. It still has to feel good to get it out there. Awesome as usual :)
Date: March 30, 2007 09:42 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
I love that you've got the photos added like a bibliography or something!
I'm a bit bummed there was no online chat this chapter (I'm desperate for more clues as to Vexin's real identity!) but really, I can't complain. I love the detail that Jim already had a framed pic of Pam at home. Can't wait for the sure to be steamy upcoming WD-SMcP coversation!
Date: March 30, 2007 08:19 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
Great story, Ii'm anxiously awaiting Chapter 12!!
Date: March 30, 2007 04:36 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
This gets better and better - but hey, no IRC this chapter! -is sad- I love Vexin. She needs to figure Squirrel out quick, and for sure this time.
Date: March 29, 2007 11:43 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
HOLY HELL IS RIGHT!!!! again, i love you. and, (please don't hate me for this) but Matthew Czerny is HOT. ^_^ but i refuse to say he's hotter than Jim, that's just wrong. oh, and btw, i LOVE that you/Jim came up with the name Czerny, that was the name of the composer of my first "real" piano piece! ah, memories..
Date: March 29, 2007 11:09 am Title: In the room the women come and go
HOLY HELL indeed!!! oh that coniving Pam!!! she knows EXACTLY what she is doing. and i LOVE it. thanks mox.
Date: March 29, 2007 01:50 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.
hahaha. she SO totally knows...
Date: March 29, 2007 01:10 am Title: Time to turn back and descend the stair
ok, officially now, mox, i not only love you but rever you as a genius. that was just PERFECT. "this is it. this is my favorite color." and with that, this is my fave chapter so far!
Date: March 28, 2007 09:19 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
This is my nightly routine: Come home from work. Turn on computer. Say (out loud) "Come on, McPants, come on" like my computer is a slot machine and I'm begging for three giant red sevens to show up on my next turn. Thanks, Moxie.
Date: March 28, 2007 08:22 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
This is how you leave it??? Are you evil?? (But in a completely genius and awesome way). How much longer is Jim going to keep this up? Seriously...edge. of. my. seat.
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 06:48 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
Aaaah!! Jim's digging himself into a deeper hole every second!! I can't imagine how Pam will react when she finds out about what Jim's been doing!
Date: March 28, 2007 06:23 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
Ah, you have to update! Pam's gonna do something crazy. I can't wait.
Date: March 28, 2007 04:44 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
Oh, man, the extent of Jim's lies are going from bad to worse! He's made Squirrel a person! With a face! And a whole name! He's screwed when the truth comes out. Oh, what a tangled web we weave...
Very interested in Pam being interested in sex talk with Squirrel! Though I wonder if Jim would really be able to go through with it, knowing that Pam thinks he's someone else...
Date: March 28, 2007 01:50 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
I deleted my original review because I realized I had more to say. First things first- this stuff is getting real good, so please don't hold back the other half for too long!
Secondly, I'm curious to know if Pam is onto Jim's game, or if she's legitimately hot for Squirrel. I like to think that she's playing HIM now, but the clue from her conversation with Vexin sort of leads me to believe that she's not onto him.... ahhhh the mystery! Hurry soon!!!
Date: March 28, 2007 01:47 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
Niiiiice! I can't wait to read the next half. Don't hold back from us too long. Its getting real good.
Date: March 28, 2007 12:41 pm Title: In the room the women come and go
wonderful chapter. Jim is so devious.
Date: March 28, 2007 11:38 am Title: In the room the women come and go
Jim is So Dead if/when Pam finds out. It's one thing to chat her up under a pseudonym, it's another to deliberately mislead her with a photo of someone else. But you know what? It's the fact that this show is based on real people, who make real mistakes, that makes it so charming. Maybe the only thing that will save Jim's ass now is some really hot cybersex, followed by his online confession. She'll either kill him or forgive him. :)
Either way, I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: March 28, 2007 10:32 am Title: In the room the women come and go
and the plot thickens...
Yep, Jim's in real trouble now. There's only so far that he can take this.
And I love how Pam has told Kelly about "Matt"...or that Kelly somehow found out.
Also, I think that Pam already knows Jim's secret and is going to make him squirm a little.
Thanks!
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 28, 2007 09:56 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky
McPants is so hot!
Please please please make Jim slip and give something away so Pam knows, and then she can be in control of the situation. I cringe thinking about Pam's feelings if Jim continues this. I want her to figure it out and then mess with his head a little.
10 [Report This]Date: March 28, 2007 08:21 am Title: In the room the women come and go
great job moxie (:
loved the chapter. i'm going to be very excited for them to meet. can't wait for the rest of the story. wonderful writing.
Melissa*
Date: March 28, 2007 08:04 am Title: In the room the women come and go
Holy Hell, indeed! If Squirrel/Matt/Jim and WD/Pam have cyber-nookie I will implode. Really. Like a dying star.
And googling 'tall and dorky' just kills.
And somehow, through all of this kookiness, Jim will have to come clean, but still get Pam to forgive him. It seems like one of those rules of the universe. And I am totally thinking of a You've Got Mail vibe of some sort, so I'm not thinking creepy. A little pathetic, but we know Jim is pathetic when it comes to Pam.
Date: March 28, 2007 07:42 am Title: In the room the women come and go
Jim is getting a bit too creepy and stalker-y for my tastes. HE NEEDS TO JUST TELL HER. The more he does this the more she's just going to be pissed. I'm pretty sure she knows but I think she's just getting madder and madder as she toys with him to get him to slip up. Maybe I've got this all wrong. But askjdfhasdgl I still love this story and I hope it doesn't continue in this creepy fashion too much longer.
Date: March 28, 2007 06:42 am Title: In the room the women come and go
Jim is digging himself in so deep. He should have gone to her house last night for the movie. Or, he should have not sent a picture today, and showed up on her doorstep tonight with a picture. As long as they are really discreet and keep everything out of work, and Karen is not parked outside of Pam's place...
Pam's going to be more angry as it goes on....
That guy is kinda cute. Does he know his picture is being used as Squirrel/Matt McPants? (Is it Mr. Moxie? If so... niiice!)
Date: March 28, 2007 06:10 am Title: In the room the women come and go
Oh, MAN! The tension just keeps growing! The chat!sex is SO gonna get Jim in trouble. COME CLEAN, MAN! Eeeeek. But I know he won't. *sigh*
And where's Karen? Hmm...inquiring minds want to know.
Though I must say that Ryan's belief that everyone online are 'freaks and perverts' is one echoed by my husband. That made me giggle.
Jeez! You've crafted a delicious story here. But the wondering is starting to kill me (in a good way, of course, hence the 'delicious' comment.)
Great job, Moxie. Can't wait for more.