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Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Wow...I am starting to get scared for Jim that something is going to slip and either Pam will completely figure it out (either in person or in the chat) or someone else will (Vexin).  What is Jim going to do?  I cannot believe how addicting this story is.  Wonderful!

Reviewer: super_perfect Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:20 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

ok mox - i finally am reading it and all i can say is: i love you.

 

Reviewer: thatswhatshesaid07 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

So, I'm thinking Pam has an incling that Squirrel_McPants is Jim since when he first comes into the chat room vexin says "speak of the devil" in reference to McPants and seems to be talking about Jim. And is Pam just really horny? Because I feel like if she's just looking to temporarily fill a void she wouldn't do it with Squirrel, since he's become sort of a confidant. I'm thinking she's suspicious of something right now.

...But I could be totally off the mark, too, so, yeah...

Reviewer: gwgal Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 05:54 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

I may have things thrown at me for this, but I really hope McPants does not send her a picture, either of himself or Jonathan or someone else.  I kind of like that McPants is absent and not defined for her; that way it's kind of like he's whispering in her ear as the voice of reason, telling her how to deal with Jim.  Or maybe I'm just hoping for many chapters of delicious suspense before she discovers Jim is McPants!  

That being said, I read this part earlier today and the part where she says it might take a month or two made me stop in my tracks.  I can't keep checking this site five times a day for more Squirrel for another two months!!!   

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 04:33 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Ok she has to know that it's him...and the blowup when she finally does find out it's definitely him should be fun to read...can't wait!

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 04:23 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

I sense a picture of Jonathan coming...!
Awesome chapter. I love that Jim is becoming remorseful about the whole Squirrel McPants double-life, but not quite enough to give it up.

Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 04:11 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

OH MY GOSH!  He SOOO needs to send a picture of himself...don't string her along any more!  She's already going to be upset because Squirrelly is him...why rub salt into the wound??

*sits on edge of chair*

Ok, Moxie...I'm literally on the edge of my seat.  More please!  :)

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 03:24 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

HAHA ! That pic is too funny! Ohmygoshh PLEASE have Jim reveal himself to Pam as Squirrel!! Ah! SOON

Reviewer: maryuc Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Lordy, lordy, lordy.  I love this story!  Please update soon - I cant wait to find out what happens next!!!!  Does Pam know?  I'm so excited!!!

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 02:50 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Oh! My stomach is in knots!!! What's Jim gonna do?!? He just keeps digging his grave deeper and deeper! Didn't he ever hear the saying, "what a tangled web we weave when we practice to deceive" when he was younger? Write like the wind, woman!!!

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Damn!!!  Pam has a crush on McPants.  Does she know that McPants=Jim???  Oooh, the mystery!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 02:36 pm Title: And time yet for a hundred indecisions

Oh wow.  I can't believe I have to quit reading.  Stupid going home from work.  [Stupid working making it so I couldn't get farther than this.]  I love the metaness of reading an online fanfic about characters chatting online!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 01:15 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Couldn't see the photo but loved the chapter.  Keep it going.

Reviewer: kitesflyhigher Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 12:17 pm Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Ah, that last link didn't work for me!  But this chapter is awesome.  Crazy, but awesome.  What's Pam doing?  Please update soon, I'm seriously dying over here.

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 11:19 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

God I love this story.  I'm trying to decide whether if I were Jim I would do the "You've Got Mail"  ending, arranging for a meeting and then showing up and hoping she forgives his deception.  I always though Jenna Fischer compares to Meg Ryan a bit.  You rule, by the way.

 

   

Reviewer: ElizabethLynn Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 11:09 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Yay!  TWoP was down, but I remembered you said there would be new Squirrel today, and here it is!  Wooooo!

Yes, I've got SquirrelFever, and I've got it bad. 

Reviewer: Rayne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 11:03 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Oh lordy.. he's getting in deep now. I can't wait to see the pic he sends!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 10:40 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

I am so glad you brought up Wedding Singer, I have most of the songs from the Musical on my Jim/Pam playlist...ooh ooh if you can find the song "If I Told You" I think you'd really enjoy it...and "Grow Old With You" is much prettier and it has an extra verse...

 

anyways, I love this story so much and I wait anxiously for more!! 

Reviewer: mitahrogers Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 10:29 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

love the direction of this story, this might be my favorite chapter thus far. well done moxie!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 10:12 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

I think that Pam knows it's him and she's known all along.  I'm wondering if now she is getting frustrated because he's broken up with Karen and still hasn't said anything to her despite knowing how she feels. 

Oy - now I'm starting to speculate on fanfic AND spoilers lol.

Honestly though I love this story and can't wait to hear more!  You have most certainly made this hianous most bearable!  Thank you :)

Reviewer: kat1201 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 10:01 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Ooh... I'm not sure what to think of Pam's attitude towards Jim now. Seems like Jim is in a bind as well not only with the picture but because it's going to become more difficult to conceal who he is. I'm looking forward to seeing how this works out!

Reviewer: altoids Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 09:56 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

i love this story!! every day i check most recent stories hoping for an update! im really excited to see how it all turns out, part of me thinks pam has no idea, part of me thinks she does, and part of me thinks she planted the seed on purpose and planned the whole thing! update, update, update to feed my addiction

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 09:26 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Excellent, yet again, Moxie. This really is the only cuer for the hiatus-blues!
I am so excited and nervous about this very flirty Pam:
'WalkingDisaster> Well, feel free to come up and find out. ;-)'
I am so thrilled she said that!

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 08:55 am Title: Beneath the music from a farther room.

Ah, what a tangled web we weave
When we first practice to deceive.

And Jim's about to tangle himself up in knots he won't know how to get out of.
Can I just mention how much I love Jan? It really does seem like she cares about the people who work for her. More than she gets credit for.
And I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one who got the Wedding Singer parallels.
I can't wait for the next part!
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 08:49 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Holy crap.  I'm hooked already.  I've been hearing about this story in other stories' comments for a while and finally decided to just dig in.  Can't wait!

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