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Reviewer: Clare Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 01:14 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Wow, very nice Moxie. My husband drinks Glenfiddich. It tastes like fire to me, but I love that Jim drinks it ;). I'm getting nervous for him though, he needs to come clean soon or he's gonna be in trouble eeeeeek! It's an aweome story.

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 01:06 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Mox, I just want to tell you that this story is making me FREAK OUT.  I am so nervous about what's going to happen!  You're turning my stomach in knots; it's like I'm in high school all over again.  Why is this?  I don't know... but I can't wait to see the fallout of Jim's actions.  And yes, if Pam talks to him, there's going to be some trouble in paradise, because Karen's going to assume that Jim's already told her about them breaking up!  OMG!  DRAMA.  I don't know if I can handle this.  What have you gotten our boy into??

Reviewer: lama Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 01:06 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Squirrel_McPants> Yeah, you caught me. I'm really Jim. I've been stalking you.

Mr. McPants is living on the edge!  Squirrel is going to have to be super careful if he continues to give Pam things to ask Jim.  I'm sure Karen is going to be watching like a hawk.  Also, I need to know who Vixen is and what Vixen knows.  Ok?  Thanks.

 PS- Words cannot express how much I love this story.  I will die when Pam finds out McPants true identity.  DIE.

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:53 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

yikes! well, now he knows how she would feel if she knew it was him... more please, and soon!  I need more!!!

Reviewer: Office O Holic Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:42 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

AWESOME! I love how Jim really confessed but Pam didnt even think to take it seriously. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:40 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

I get so excited to see an update to this story...I'm practically giddy. -->dork<--

Great chapter -- Love that 'Squirrel' is prompting Pam to talk to Jim, but isn't he forgetting Karen's threats? Shouldn't he wait until the volatile Karen situation calms down before telling Pam to initiate more contact with him? Hmm. The next chapter should be very interesting.

I hope you're feeling better, Moxie!



Author's Response: too much whisky & spending time with the woman he loves can make a boy forget certain things.  Good of you to notice!  :-)

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:32 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

I always get all giddy and my heart jumps a little when I see that you've updated this!!!I have a feeling that he's going to slip and say "later, Beesley.." !!!!

Reviewer: starblossom56 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:28 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

WooHOO! I'm having a hard time with being coherent today, but YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! And a big old EEEEEEeeeee! for Pam not only giving her real name, but also to the fact that she'd be angry if SMcP turns out to be Jim.

I hate Karen for delaying the LOVE talk. I cannot wait!!! Thanks for the quick update :D

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:24 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Oh, Moxie, what can be said!? I was halfway through my 2:00 class today when I remembered you said you'd be posting a new chapter, and admittedly that put an extra spring in my step as I hurried home. And of course you did not disappoint! I can't wait for more and to find out just when Jim will tell Pam that he is Squirrel so they can take off their McPants. Haha

Keep it up--you always leave us wanting more (twss!) --CH

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:18 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

azlyrics - best lyrics site.its what i always use.

And I thought all guys favorite color was green. maybe its just the guys in my life. all about the green they are.

and amazing chapter. jim did admit who he was sorta kinda halfway.

i can't wait to find out what happens next. and gah! impatient me. 

Reviewer: Pamster Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:08 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

So I've only been refreshing the 'Most Recent' page two or three times a day, and you have no idea how happy I am every time you update. This is such an engrossing story, and especially after Chapter 7 I have to say, keep it up! I love it!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:01 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

I so cannot wait to find out what happens on Monday when Pam sees Jim and Karen not together... will she pick up on the 'coincidence?'
This is such a well-crafted story, Moxie! From its originality to Krazy!Karen to Sneaky!Jim... so good!

Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:01 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

YAYYYYYY!!!!!!  I was SO happy to see you had updated already!  They are just too cute!

 

I hope you are feeling better by the way!

Reviewer: Maybe Once Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 12:00 pm Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Jim, Jim, Jim.

 That dude will need to legally change his name to Squirrel McPants and join the witness protection program if he keeps getting more detailed in his sneakiness..... 

Reviewer: girl7 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:59 am Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Okay, I could not wipe the enormous grin off my face as I read this -- you're killing me!  That last line - guh, I could so hear Jim saying that (even though he's typing it).  This continues to be absolutely riveting - it's the weirdest thing because on one hand, I'm DYING for Pam to find out the truth, but on the other, I don't ever want the story to end!

...Translated?  Damned good work - again!

Reviewer: agd300 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:56 am Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

I get a big smile on my face every time I see an update to this story.  I love where it's going and how you are getting there.  Update soon!

Reviewer: mess of jess Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:53 am Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Oh, Moxie. Thank you. I'm glad you got to use "Girlfriend" in your story. I love that Jim has Pam ding little things just so they can talk. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:49 am Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

I think I was looking forward to seeing Pam on Sunday as much as Jim was!  (Pout!!)  Talk about a punch to the grief bone.

And Squirrel joking about being Jim?  ARGH!  Too freaking much.  Almost as evil as the Avril Lavigne song as WD's theme song.  Love. It.

Please don't make us wait too long for Ch. 8.  (Don't go all Greg Daniels on us.)  That is just mean.

Reviewer: Rayne Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:49 am Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

I couldn't wait. I had to read it now! It was awesome.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:46 am Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Oh My Gosh!  I cannot, CANNOT, wait to find out what happens when this all  resolves itself.  But I am not good at waiting.  I will probably read the last page of the new Harry Potter first when it comes out, just to see who dies.  Awesome chapter, hope you are feeling better :)

Reviewer: Dooflegna Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 11:40 am Title: For decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse.

Moxie, you're so awesome.  My hope beyond hope with this story has been that you wouldn't drag it on, and it's progressing really really well, so keep it up!  You're awesome!

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 10:57 am Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Wow. Did not see that coming. Still loving this... gotta go back and read it again!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 09:04 am Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

Wow that was some chapter.  I definitely think all that anger is really hiding inside of Karen.

Reviewer: Amalia Kensington Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 08:27 am Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

YIKES!!!!
Okay, is it bad for me to say that I kinda really like Karen The Bitch? Because I do. I REALLY do. Hell hath no fury and all that.
Oh yeah. Totally hot. (And, I'm sorry, but Jim kinda deserves it...a teeny tiny bit....but it doens't mean I'm not going to defend him!! TEAM JIM!)
*ahem*
Anyway, I can't wait for the next part!!
MOX!!! PINS AND NEEDLES!!
thx.
cheers.
--Lex

Reviewer: hellogoodmornin Signed [Report This]
Date: March 19, 2007 07:25 am Title: Do I dare disturb the universe?

So I'm pretty much addicted to your fic. I have it bookmarked and I check it every hour to see if you've posted a new chapter. lol Thank you for that. lol 

Excellent writing. Obviously I love it... and will be sitting here waiting for more chapters! :) 

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