1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
"some things will be made clear, here soon."
Or not. A very odd AU, but an interesting one. Wish it had gotten further off the ground.
1 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2019 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well then. That's a different kind of phone call...
7 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Shout out for Bukowski! Not your typical story but I'm liking it!
Date: March 10, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
:O. I was wondering what the call was about, but poor Jim. I want more
Date: March 09, 2007 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is great, and so not what I was expecting. You've got a lot in here - the inherent trouble in their relationship with him unable to just *talk* to her about his feelings, Jim's personal pain and the bombshell at the end that let's us know why. Very interesting so far...
9 [Report This]Date: March 08, 2007 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh no! This is so sad for Jim. Karen must feel awful for what she said and how she acted. Please update soon.
Author's Response: i'm heading on a roadtrip this weekend, so, chances are it won't be for a few days, but when i do, things will get more interesting. respect.
Date: March 08, 2007 04:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. Interesting twist I wasn't expecting! You've got me hooked! More, please!
Date: March 07, 2007 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, WOW. Your twist ... so perfect. Things like that can happen when you least expect them.
I love how Karen reacts; she's going to feel like crap after hearing Jim's last line. Like he doesn't have enough to worry about with his Dad dying, and she's immediately sulky and swearing at him.
Ooh, I am interested in reading more.