Reviews For Goodbye, Girl
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Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1

I had to giggle a little at the "choose me, love me" I don't know if youre a Grey's Anatomy watcher but thats become a huge joke between me and my dad, we scream it dramatically at each other...so I had to chuckle despite the seriousness of the story...off to read the rest!!


Author's Response: hahah that's TOTALLY where i got it from. i was watching my season 2 dvds when i wrote that one.

Reviewer: sharky Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

aw....poor Pam. I'm liking this so far!

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: April 17, 2007 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1

you're killing me smalls.

if this turns into a ryan/pam lovefest I'm so out of here. That said way to build the romantic tension! Gotta love the slow clap, and Jim way to shoot yourself in the foot. I feel like it would kind of serve him right to miss out on pam loving but I hate...hate...hate it when Pam switches her affection away really quickly, I mean he loved her for 3 years he's allowed a little indecision, she on the other hand is about 3 years of unrequited loving behind in my book. wow, long review! 

 



Author's Response: hahaha. i promise...no pam/ryan love fest. and i made jim a total dude. if anyone came up to me and professed their love, i'd probably have a similar reaction.

Reviewer: Tasha the Cookie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow, this is actually exciting. Update soon, I hope. =]

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05, 2007 06:18 am Title: Chapter 1

AWW NOOOO!! She neeeeds to go with him PLEASE! Or he stay there......either one, they need to be together!

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