Date: April 08, 2007 11:06 am Title: What does that even mean?
Moxie, I wasn't even done Squirrel_McPants, and then you hooked me on to Distance Learning. Now, you start this story! Moxie, what are you doing to me? I have a family starved for my attention. I have a body that needs food and proper hygienic care. I can't focus on either of those things while you continue to write this brilliant fanfic. Excellent work! Keep it up!
Date: April 08, 2007 07:27 am Title: What does that even mean?
Wow. Such a beautiful and poignant way to end the chapter. These two kids and their misunderstandings! Get it on already! LOL I loved the chapter and can't wait to see where you go with it.
Date: April 08, 2007 06:58 am Title: What does that even mean?
"I know that you want to hate me," she said.
SO true! I loved this. It's so believable. Thanks for writing it!
Date: April 08, 2007 06:44 am Title: What does that even mean?
OMG i LOVE this!!! More more more more!!!
Date: April 08, 2007 06:00 am Title: What does that even mean?
Oh YES! I would absolutely love it if it turned out this way. Pretty please w/sugar on top TPTB?
Lovely little Easter treat Mox. Can't wait for Chapter 2
Date: April 08, 2007 05:24 am Title: What does that even mean?
You're so good at building the tension. Pam finally steps up, their fingers barely touch and CUT. You're killing me, moxie. When Karen says: why aren't you waiting for me at my place? I absolutely wanted to pop her. And when Jim says 'Oh, Pam' I wanted to cry. You've got me where you want me...please don't leave me hanging!
Date: April 08, 2007 12:27 am Title: What does that even mean?
And to think, I thought you were taking time off of "Squirrel McPants" to relax! ;) Of course not, you were working on another masterpiece! I seriously love all that you write! Keep on doing what you're doing! =D
Date: April 08, 2007 12:18 am Title: What does that even mean?
Oh, poor Pam! And poor Karen, for that matter. And, heck, while I'm at it, poor Jim, too. It's all so confusing for all of them--and for all of us! I can't wait to read more of your story. I have a feeling it'll be a lot more satisfying an outcome than what we get to see on the show. :)
Date: April 07, 2007 10:11 pm Title: What does that even mean?
I just (finally) registered here so I could leave a review for this incredible story. I would pay really big money to see this on my TV some Thursday night. Can't wait for more.
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2007 09:11 pm Title: What does that even mean?
God, how could two people who's love is apparent be so stupid about communicating those feelings? -sigh-
As always, you captured them perfectly.
Date: April 07, 2007 08:51 pm Title: What does that even mean?
Oh Moxie! That was brilliant! Bloody brilliant! I can't wait to read more.
Date: April 07, 2007 08:44 pm Title: What does that even mean?
please update soon! i've been waiting for someone to write some post-Negotiation fic and this is exactly what i was looking for. can't wait for more.
9 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2007 08:22 pm Title: What does that even mean?
"I don't think you appreciate how much you've closed yourself off to me since coming back, Jim," - yeah, that pretty much sums it up.
And Karen ruining things as usual! Well, as usual in fanfic, anyway.
This'll be good, I can feel it.
Date: April 07, 2007 08:09 pm Title: What does that even mean?
and even though I hardly ever do this, I'm going to go back and reread this chapter because it's really just what the doctor ordered (and since I am one...I think I can say that with some sense of certainty) Please post soon. I just about swooned when she put her arms around his shoulders and whispered in his ear. PERFECT :)
Date: April 07, 2007 08:09 pm Title: What does that even mean?
We may not see it until the finale, but I have to believe that we're going to see something similar to this. Pam will continue to chip away at Jim's wall until he just can't resist her any more. And Karen? She's just digging herself a big hole with her pushy behavior.
Can't wait for more, Moxie!
Date: April 07, 2007 07:52 pm Title: What does that even mean?
**sigh**
I really needed this tonight. THIS is exactly how I would love for it to happen....you need to write for this show!
I hope there's more coming - is there more coming? Pretty please??
Date: April 07, 2007 07:09 pm Title: What does that even mean?
Moxie, I love your writing, and this is really fine. But you already know that. :) Looking to see more really soon!
10 [Report This]Date: April 07, 2007 07:08 pm Title: What does that even mean?
Achingly bittersweet and beautiful. Fancy New Beesly, indeed.