8 [Report This]Date: June 06, 2007 03:54 pm Title: It's Always Have and Never Hold...
Very nice. I liked this line - "He listened quietly while she picked up her phone and explained to Roy she couldn’t do it anymore, that she wasn’t coming home-because he wasn’t home"
Date: June 02, 2007 11:16 am Title: It's Always Have and Never Hold...
I like this version of Casino Night better, but, at least they are happy now, a year later.
But this was a reat ending:
“What do we do now?” he asked. She contentedly shrugged her shoulders. “We’ll figure it out,” she smiled. “But for now-just drive."
Its just... it works. I can't say why, but its just the perfect ending.
Date: June 01, 2007 11:54 pm Title: It's Always Have and Never Hold...
That was a great story. I loved the happy ending and how she said "I can" Great job.
Date: June 01, 2007 10:51 pm Title: It's Always Have and Never Hold...
I love this song by the fray, and it ties in perfectly with your fic! great job!
Author's Response: I absolutely adore this song too! I was thinking of making all of the songs from the "How to Save A Life" cd into stories such as this..make it a series, I guess...what do you think?