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Reviewer: callisto Signed [Report This]
Date: April 11, 2011 08:46 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

Aw. I just read this again, and I don't know if I've ever commented on it, but it's adorable. :)

Reviewer: FlonkertonChamp Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: August 30, 2009 09:06 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

SQUEE! SQUEE! SQUEE!

Reviewer: Hannah_Halpert Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: August 21, 2008 11:55 am Title: Hidden Treasures

Awww that was so fluffy and lovely :)

Author's Response: Exactly what I hoped people would think.  Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05, 2008 01:21 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

*sigh* So cute!

Author's Response: FinerThings, I'm so woefully behind in replying to reviews but I wanted to say thanks!!!  So...thanks!!

Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: October 22, 2007 09:55 am Title: Hidden Treasures

So cute! Really original idea for how to tell him! I like how you have them arguing about the little things. Much more realistic than playing that everything is perfect in JAM world ALL the time. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response: I wanted something cute but not too cutesy.  I'm glad you thought it worked well.  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: LoveFool Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2007 11:05 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

awwwwwwww....ok, when he realized what was going on, I literally got a little choked up. SO GOOD!

Author's Response: So glad you liked it.  Thanks LoveFool!!!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 14, 2007 07:26 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

Awww, how sweet was this?  It's a neat trick, even though this contained little dialogue, you still have your patented pefect Pam characterization.  Great stuff, truly a perfect little piece.

Author's Response: I thought it was pretty sweet myself. :) Thank you.  There are times when writing I can see Pam's reactions so clearly - and I think this was one of them.  Glad to hear you did too. 

Reviewer: TotoDarling Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 07:08 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

This was great!!
Are you going to add more?
Please do!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Not sure if there will be more to this story - but I'm pretty sure I've got a few more left in me. :) 

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 06:43 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

Absolutely freaking adorable.  I love that even FNB isn't completely fancy and new and has trouble breaking the big new.  Very cute way of doing it!

Author's Response: Yeah I think her fanciness isn't always quite as fancy as we think.  I'm sure there's still room for her to regress a time or two.  Hopefully Jim will be right there to coach her through it.  But this wasn't about her being insecure so much as it was about her wanting to keep something only she knew close to her for just a little while.  I'm very glad you liked it.

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 08:33 am Title: Hidden Treasures

Talk about tear jerking!  What a wonderful way to share the news.  I absolutely loved the morning sickness symptoms being obliquely described through Jim's clueless reaction to them all.

And thank you so much for the lovely dedication!  We should talk more.  I just suck at timely replies.  *sigh*



Author's Response: Hee!!!  Thanks for suggesting the challenge - even though I don't think this is exactly what you had in mind. :)  But I liked writing it just the same - and am so glad you liked it too!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 13, 2007 07:00 am Title: Hidden Treasures

Awwww. Oh, this is lovely. I love that Pam guards her secret for just a little while. It feels very, very right for her personality, despite being fancy and new. I didn't manage that- but my "reveal" story isn't nearly as sweet either.  Heh. I'm so happy to read something new of yours!

Author's Response: Thank you Lis!   I don't know where this one came from - I was just walking home through the park and it hit me.  Or maybe because I just love the image of them together and happy in the future.  Might just be it!!  In any event - so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: TearCatcher Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 07:58 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

oh my god,that was the most endearing ending ever, great job

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!  That you think so makes me smile. :)

Reviewer: Ozana Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

Absolutely love this!!!

Author's Response: So glad to hear it!!!

Reviewer: false_palindrome Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 04:45 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

"Umm. Are we expecting someone?"
"Yeah." She replies, her voice almost a whisper. "In a little bit..."

So effin' cute.

Author's Response: Thank you f_p!  I just wanted it to be subtle, but sweet.  So glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Wendy Blue Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 03:25 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

Oh my God.  That was too adorable for words.  PERFECT way to tell someone. 

Those last four lines kill me in the best way possible.  AMAZING work. 



Author's Response: Sorry for killing you but so glad you liked it!  Thank you so much Wendy Blue!

Reviewer: bitterpill Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 11:46 am Title: Hidden Treasures

This left me with a big grin on my face.  Wonderful look into Pam's "secret."  Loved the set up for the big reveal.  Thank you for this!



Author's Response: Grinning is good. :)  So glad you liked it!  You're more than welcome.  It was my pleasure.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 07:58 am Title: Hidden Treasures

AWWW!!!!! i love this so much! that's the PERFECT way to tell him and the PERFECT response! "Are we expecting someone?" i love Jim Halpert. and you for writing this :) 

Author's Response: I'm kinda fond of Mr Halpert as well. :)  So, so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 07:32 am Title: Hidden Treasures

OMG, there need to be Jam!Babies.  The world needs it.  This was sweet & lovely.


Author's Response:

There does.  I'll keep writing about them till they arrive.  How's that??  LOL!  Thanks Ms. Hoo!

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 07:28 am Title: Hidden Treasures

Wow. You almost make me want to have another baby.  (Almost.)

Yeah, you're *that* good.  ;-)

I love the anticipation build as she figures out how to tell him. 



Author's Response: Well - that's pretty powerful.  :)  Thank you.  And you're very kind.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: EverybodyHurts Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 07:28 am Title: Hidden Treasures

Fluffy wonderfulness, as usual. Such a touching ending, and very FNB to surprise Jim with the child's place setting. Just lovely *reaches for another Kleenex*

Author's Response:

I wanted it to be different - but not sappy sweet.  Glad to hear I've succeeded.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 06:35 am Title: Hidden Treasures

That was so sweet.  I love the extra place setting at the table.

Author's Response: My intention. :)  I'm glad you liked it.  :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 05:42 am Title: Hidden Treasures

aww, its such a sweet story the way she told him. and its so cool the way you have her not know how and how... its good.


Author's Response: Thanks Emily!!!  I'm so glad you liked it.

Reviewer: McGigi Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12, 2007 04:21 am Title: Hidden Treasures

wheee! babyfic! This is just beautiful prose. I really hope you continue it so I can get my Jambaby fix.
Thanks for writing it!

Author's Response:

There's always a possibility of Jambaby fic where I'm concerned.  Stay tuned.   And thank you!!

Reviewer: JennInTheCity Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

What an awesome way to share the news! Great job!

Author's Response: thanks JITC!!  I'm so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11, 2007 09:41 pm Title: Hidden Treasures

I'm grinning and choked up all at once. Her garage sale plate with the tiny chips (provenance, I say!) and the size of a poppy seed - such great details. And, I guess I don't need to tell you that the last two lines made me a little ferklempt.

Thanks for this, you...so so so lovely.



Author's Response: Well that's a lovely reaction!!!  The size of the poppy seed was stolen from some pregnancy website...since you know I'm too busy carousing to have any kids of my own.   You are most welcome.  Anytime. :)

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