8 [Report This]Date: January 15, 2008 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
"He remembers oh so vividly that if he could take her to the Pacific Ocean, to the seaside, that maybe she’d fall in love with him."
So sad but so beautifully written.
Date: January 09, 2008 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
So, I definitely wanted to read this because "Seaside" happens to be one of my favorite songs :) Sort of wistful story, but I felt like you handled it really well and that the emotions were captured just write.
Great job :)
Author's Response: Great song, right? There are a few more Kooks songs that I want to base some fics on..perhaps it can be a series!
Date: January 09, 2008 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh. What a perfect song. It's one of my favorites--so full of meloncholy and hope. I feel like you really captured that here. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: January 09, 2008 09:27 am Title: Chapter 1
That was just beautiful. Oh, poor Jim. I'm so glad that chapter of his life is over, hopefully for good.
Author's Response: Me too! I'm all for happy, finally together JAM but sometimes I just can't leave the angst alone =P
Date: January 09, 2008 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was a beautiful story! You're an excellent writer!
Author's Response: Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2008 05:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful and heartbreaking. Great job. Got anything else cooking in that brain of yours?
Author's Response: Thank you! In fact, I do =D!
8 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2008 04:07 am Title: Chapter 1
This was very nicely written, and this was a great line:
Not that he actually thinks ocean air is supposed to burn, but the way he’s feeling inside – rubbed raw, rough and open...
-Rose : )
Author's Response: Thanks =)! I was proud of that line too!