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Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2023 12:29 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Jim knows his Beelsy. This is a cute little Halloween fic! Thanks.

Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 13, 2023 12:24 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Hee hee Pam is a genius!

Author's Response: That she is!

Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2023 11:48 pm Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Pam is up to something 😏

Author's Response: Hehe she is!

Reviewer: Anne-Rose Sweetkins Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: May 11, 2023 11:43 pm Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Hee hee Jam banter is the best!

Author's Response: It is!!

Reviewer: Yellowberry22 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 19, 2022 01:42 pm Title: Marley's Chains

Proud, but grumpy.

Author's Response: I'm sorry x

Reviewer: Yellowberry22 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 19, 2022 01:41 pm Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Poltergeist's, fluff, and a mom - that everything I want in a fic

Author's Response: Well I aim to please

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed [Report This]
Date: November 08, 2022 01:28 pm Title: Marley's Chains

I can’t help but be curious about how Jim
found out about Pam’s death, and his actual reaction/breakdown.
Also seeing the situation from Karen’s POV
could be interesting because even though I’m
not a fan of her, I think that seeing your boyfriend
going into the psych ward because of another woman would be heartbreaking.It’s one thing for Jim to say he has feelings for Pam, but it’s another for Jim to lose himself over her.
Also Jim’s breakdown would throw a serious wrench into her plans of moving to New York for the corporate job.
So could you think about writing another fic to go along with this one? Thanks
BTW do you might know when we might get another update for Hello Daddy? I’m really missing it.

Author's Response: Ah thank you so much for the review. But oof! I think several people would murder me if I added another chapter! I think this is firmly done and I’m back to the land of fluff. If you ever want to know more about a fic, just come say hi on Discord!

Hello Daddy will be back soon. I’ve had some motivational issues on it, but I’m midway through the chapter so it shouldn’t be too much longer. Sorry for keeping you waiting!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2022 07:09 am Title: Marley's Chains

Um. Ow.

Well, this was a brutal reading experience. I thought you did a good job placing us in poor Jim's addled state of mind and giving us enough clues to figure out the ending in the text itself - the somewhat dreamy and inconsistent state of time, moving back and forth between places and realities without warning. And ugh, what an especially terrible moment for Jim to lose her, just when he has hope.

Ouch. Just ouch.

Author's Response: I know, I know, I'm sorry. There was other Halloween fluff, so hopefully that can cheer you up. So very sorry but thank you for the review!!

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2022 10:50 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Oh, Pam. You clever devil. This is why Jim married you.

Author's Response: Exactly :)

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2022 10:48 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Oh, Jim. The prankster has become the pranked! This was pretty well executed on Pam's part... and she did a good job of taking advantage of some preexisting issues to cover her tracks too.

Author's Response: Everything she needed was right there. Just needs a mastermind to execute it

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2022 10:42 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Helene's such a drama queen... which maybe made things work with her and Michael.

Hmmm. More items misplaced...

Author's Response: I wonder what on earth could be going on

Reviewer: darjeelingandcoke Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 05, 2022 10:22 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Hmmm. Bulbs blowing out. Scissors mysteriously missing. A wall projector in the mix... be afraid, Jim. Be very afraid.

Author's Response: He really should be

Reviewer: GodSaveAutocracy Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: November 01, 2022 11:15 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Most excellent! Such a cute little story. I will very much have to take Pam’s side on this. I’ve had many times experiences with ghosts myself, which is easy to do, when you live in such an old city.

Thank you for this! Such a delightful little story! Happy Halloween to you!

Author's Response:

Ah thank you so much! I take Pam's side too! Drives my husband nuts haha!

Happy belated Halloween to you too! 

Reviewer: WithaY Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 06:19 pm Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

What a sweet little Halloween read! I love a mostly Jam centered fan fic but your little glimpses of Phyllis and Dwight made me smile and laugh as they were so in character (“Oh darn, I guess we don’t get to hear how the story ends!” LOL!)!

I definitely need to rewatch this episode but I loved Pam pranking Jim… clearly she’s learned a few things from her husband! I loved the Hocus Pocus movie night too! You are such a gift to this community and I’m always tickled by anything you write, love! Thanks for taking time out of your busy schedule to give us this little Halloween goodie! You’re the absolute BEST!

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! For the review and your very kind words!!

Reviewer: New Hogfan Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 02:15 pm Title: Marley's Chains

This was a very interesting premise.
I can see Jim losing it if Pam did die,
especially when he finally realized he
had a real chance with her, but shot her down anyway.
Jim can now see how he truly took took Pam for granted, much like how Roy always did.
I can also sort of see how Jim having a break down over Pam could be the last straw for his relationship with Karen, because it’s very unlikely that
Jim would have the same reaction if she had died.

Author's Response:

Yeah it's quite a unique one! This is one of my favourite songs and I really wanted to write a fic for it, but it's about someone who's friend dies in a car crash, so it was never going to be a cheery one.

Yeah Jim absolutely wouldn't feel like this if Karen died - as he shouldn't!!

Thanks for the review 

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 02:01 pm Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

So basically if it was a real ghost, Jim is a major wuss and needs his pregnant wife to save him!

The cute fluffy goodness has made me feel much better after the heartache of Marley.

Wonderful writing as always, my love

Author's Response:

Oh absolute wuss. I'd love to see that haha

See, this fic had a purpose. So I'm sorry about the other, but hope this helped

Thanks so much! 

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 01:50 pm Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

This is MUCH BETTER than the other one

Still upset with you, but wonderful job!!!!

Author's Response: Hahah! Well this one has served it's purpose then!!

Reviewer: Graceface Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 01:11 pm Title: Marley's Chains

Oh my god. You made me stop reading the fluffy goodness for this. Why do you want to make us cry?

Brilliantly written and beautiful corrections of the moments they missed but oh my god.

Please promise never to do this to us ever again if I give you all my jellies.

Author's Response:

Well that's why the fluffy one was there, so that you could recover! But yeah, there were a lot of missed opportunities for them.

SO SORRY and now back to the fluff 

Reviewer: InRomanovWeTrust Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 09:11 am Title: Marley's Chains

YOU ARE THE WORST! 😭 HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME.

but I love you and it was written really well but my feelings are hurt.

You can have all the jellies anyway because I love you.

Author's Response: I'm SO SORRY!!!! Thank you for the review, I promise not to write anything but fluff for a very long time

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 07:51 am Title: Marley's Chains

Oof yeah that one hits hard. Not just the way that they could have really been honest with each other but the effects on Jim's mind. While hard to read it's also well done. Wish I could say more, but that's really all I've got.

Author's Response: Yeah, sorry about that. I promise I'm back to all things fluff now! Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 07:42 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

Ah toddler legs. Yup explains how things go missing or misplaced around here too. Of course Jim is a good sport about it all. Shows they still like to have fun with each other. Great job with this one.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed this :)

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 07:40 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

I'll bet Pam's having the time of her life with all of this. Lots of fun to be sure. Though I wouldn't be surprised if Jim shows up in Ghostbuster attire at some point just on sheer principle.

Author's Response:

Oh I would love to see Jim as a Ghostbuster! Maybe that's next year's Halloween fic sorted!

And absolutely, Pam would be having an absolute ball! 

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 07:34 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

There's the slightly annoying post-divorce Helene we know. Nice that Pam is sticking up for Jim. Seems like she's got a bit of a trick up her sleeve though. Wonder how much of of a treat it'll be for Jim?

Author's Response: I wonder indeed!!

Reviewer: warrior4 Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 07:30 am Title: I Ain't 'Fraid of No Ghost

So this is a fun continuation of that episode. Yes Gabe and Robert are both creepy. Nice to see Jim and Pam still bantering with each other. Makes it fun to read. Kangaroo Pam was always a fun costume for sure. Onwards.

Author's Response: Yes they really are, although the more I rewatch the more I kinda like Robert! And yes, Kangeroo Pam is great. Jim Bosh is my fave though :)

Reviewer: Robert Dunder Signed 1 [Report This]
Date: October 31, 2022 05:33 am Title: Marley's Chains

Oh my God. *shudders*

You know what, it may not be everyone's cup of tea (because you know... spoiler) but I loved reading it. I'm not saying I'm sadistic. I just like reading these types of things.

You can see all the roads not taken and all the things that could have been. This is a great interpretation of how things between Jim and Pam could end in disaster. Let's all thank our lucky stars you weren't the showrunner. Kidding.

Have all my jellybeans.

Author's Response:

You're not sadistic? Are you sure??

Hate to break it to you, but I'm back to all things fluff now

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