1 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2023 11:59 pm Title: A Kwanzaa Christmas
This was such a fun read! Almost as good as watching an episode. I enjoyed reading about Jim and Pam being sweet together and actually working together to help Dwight for a change, and of course Michael being Michael. I loved the little Ryan cameo, and of course, every detail of the party planning and the actual party. The ending was just perfect.
Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us!
1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2022 07:23 am Title: A Kwanzaa Christmas
Ah, I do enjoy a good sticking-it-to-corporate-Ryan scene
1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2022 07:03 am Title: Stars
This is canon-quality cringe humor.
1 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2018 07:37 pm Title: The Crash
Love this! I was a little hesitant because of the format but YOU totally made it work! That call with Mose had me cracking up.
Date: June 15, 2009 07:52 pm Title: A Kwanzaa Christmas
this chapter made me laugh...and a mention of pushing daisies =] huzzah to that
9 [Report This]Date: November 24, 2008 10:25 pm Title: A Kwanzaa Christmas
I love how awkward Michael can make any situation.
9 [Report This]Date: September 13, 2008 05:47 pm Title: The Trial
Wow. I really liked the chapters so far, I hop you're still planning on continuing? I can't wait to see how Jim acts around Karen!
Date: August 05, 2008 10:39 am Title: The Trial
Transient Lesbian Con Artist! HA! And then it's all OK because she likes Battlestar. Man alive I love Dwight. That shit is dawesome.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked this belsum. That was actually my favorite line of this act, so I'm glad that you found it funny as well. Thank you for taking the time to review, I really appreciate it!
Date: July 29, 2008 06:32 pm Title: The Trial
hahaha so funny ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks BuffyFreak7, I appreciate the review.
Date: July 28, 2008 09:20 am Title: The Trial
OK, you've taken the already-cool Holly and made her awesome! Also, "I knew it was going to be Kevin anyway," made me laugh out loud. This is continuing to be so great!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked that line nqllisi. That was one of the last lines I put in on an edit, so I'm glad it worked. I think it kind of puts a period on the end of that scene. Thanks for reviewing!
8 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2008 06:56 pm Title: The Trial
REALLY enjoyed this act. I especially enjoyed your Holly. Great job.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked Holly NanReg. Since we know so little about her I kind of had to create most of her up. Also because I'm sort of writing these as real episodes it makes sense that early into the season they would spend a little of time with her character to get the viewers to know her a little better. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2008 02:27 pm Title: The Trial
Awesome :) Great characterizations all around!
Author's Response: Thank you so much untherapy. I'm glad that you liked the characterizations, I try hard to get those right. It was especially hard with Holly because we know so little about her. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: July 24, 2008 12:14 pm Title: The Trial
Oh my gods. Karen. That is brilliant. Looking forward to this "episode"!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the Karen "twist" as it were. I hope to mine it for funny and uncomfortable situations in the coming acts. Thank you for taking the time to review belsum.
Date: July 24, 2008 12:09 pm Title: Stars
I love that you had the engagement be silent. What a great touch!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked that. I thought it was a nice compromise between actually seeing the proposal and Jim and Pam wanting some privacy for it. Thank you for taking the time to review belsum.
Date: July 24, 2008 10:39 am Title: Stars
Wow. I don't even know how I'm going to remember all the things I want to call genius! Michael saying "revolutionish" and calling a meeting for 40 minutes later. Oh and Michael telling everyone to strap themselves on. HEE! I love the set-up and that everything follows so smoothly from the events of the finale - from Holly's crush on Michael to the Slow Kevin bit to Phyllis seeing Angela with Dwight. Brilliant work.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you for such a nice review. I'm glad that you felt like things flowed from the finale, that was really a main goal of mine in writing this. It only takes place around a week (At the beginning) from it, and so most of the storylines are still relevant. Thank you again for the review belsum.
Date: July 24, 2008 10:30 am Title: The Trial
Hehehe......great opening. I found myself really wanting that to happen. I think it would be great fun to have Karen shake things up a bit.
Author's Response: I think it would be a lot of fun too. I don't think they'd ever do this on the show, but I think it would be great if they did. That is, as long as they give her a personality this time around. Thanks for taking the time to review Pisa.
10 [Report This]Date: July 23, 2008 06:07 am Title: Stars
Very cool. I really enjoyed the confusion over Jim and Pam being engaged and/or Pam being knocked up. And the whole mics off thing seemed very realistic to me, I love how the proposal went. This show wants to make us not so privy to everything that happens so that felt really Office like. Great!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review kgreene. I'm glad that you liked the proposal and the other scene as well. I like to write those kind of scenes, they are a little difficult to convey in only words, but hopefully it gets through. Thanks again!
Date: July 23, 2008 05:51 am Title: The Trial
Yay, more! I love that David honestly appreciates Michael, but also is smart enough to know how to handle him- have a separate conference call AND make sure Jim is on the line. This just feels so much like the actual show. Love it.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words and review nqllisi. I thought it was a fun idea for David to insulate himself and others from Michael as much as possible but yet still treat him like the boss of the branch and professionally.
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2008 05:06 pm Title: The Trial
whoa totally didn't expect THAT to happen. can't WAIT to read what happends next!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm glad that I caught you by surprise there BuffyFreak7. I think its a fun twist that could bring about all kinds of fun and uncomfortable situations. Thank you for taking the time to review.
Date: July 22, 2008 02:59 pm Title: The Trial
Interesting twist. I'm curious to see where you go with this...
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the twist, and I hope you'll enjoy the payoff for it. I doubt they'd do this on the show, but I don't think it would be a bad idea if they did. Still, thank you for taking the time to review JennInTheCity, I appreciate it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2008 02:54 pm Title: The Trial
I liked this and I don't usually read script stories, just skip over them. This one intrigued me. I just hope this is not what happens in season 5! Look forward to where this goes.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you decided to give this one a chance Cheeb. I know that a lot of people don't even consider reading script-fic, and I don't really understand that. Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it.
Date: July 14, 2008 11:38 am Title: Stars
OK, this was adorable. I think you've managed to convey that wonderful mix of awkward and sweet and laugh-out-loud that the episodes do. And of course we got an engagement, and that is always good! Very nicely constructed, and I especially like the way you've written Michael.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the way I've written Michael. I think he kind of swings from being an obnoxious kid to a tragic grownup, and I enjoy sort of showing both sides of that my self. Thank you for taking the time to review nqllisi.
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2008 09:08 pm Title: Stars
ahhhh!
AMAZING!!!!
Author's Response: Haa, thank you! I'm glad that you liked it Dwangie.
Date: July 13, 2008 08:06 pm Title: Stars
very good story! i could have used more JAM, but i feel that way about the real show sometimes. ;-) thanks so much for sharing!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it officerules06. I think we can always use more JAM (at least I know I can) but with the proposal at the end I didn't want to go too heavy during the "episode" as a whole. Thanks again.
10 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2008 06:29 pm Title: Stars
WOW! I don't know how I missed this story. I just read all 5 chapters in one sitting and felt like I watched the lost S4 episode!
Everyone was completely written in character and you pulled off the JAM stuff amazingly! Just the right amount of sweetness without being overly sentimental. I really felt for both Jim and Pam..you wrote them so true to character, I felt just as anxious while reading your script as I do when I watch an authentic episode.
I'm actually glad I read it all in one sitting because it flowed so well and like I said, made me feel as if I was experiencing an actual episode.
I don't normally like the script format fics (which is maybe why I missed it when it was originally posted), but this was just...WOW! /Pam
Author's Response: Thank you very much Abigail. I'm glad that the whole thing flowed together for you,and that you found things in character, those are the two things I try to achieve most of all. I'm glad that you liked the JAM stuff especially, I was worried how people might view the scene with Pam in the stairwell or the proposal, so I'm glad that they seemed to work for you. I appreciate you taking the time to leave such a nice review!