Wonderful.  This is so good.  I've actually enjoyed this all along, and I have NO idea why I haven't reviewed... sorry.

This is a great line: "She'd caused a bar fight, an office attack and a job loss - all in the span of a two days."  Of course my crazy mind imagines her saying this to someone, and the reply is "Well, you've got to start somewhere!"  I know, I'm sick.

I found that break room scene so heartbreaking.  Now we know why it's called the "break" room, right?  Poor Pam.

I really like your list of images and the following lines. 

I think you said this story has a stream of consciousness style; it definitely works for you. 

My one suggestion for the future (you probably don't want to change this one for now) is to have unique Chapter titles.  It's always hard to tell where we left off when all the titles are either Jim or Pam.  Mind you, I will re-read and figure it out, but it would be easier with unique titles.

I promise to be a faithful reviewer from here on.