9 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2007 07:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see what happens in Florida! Thank God Roy didn't go! Great idea for the story, it sounds like it is going to be really good!
Date: January 30, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like how this is going. =) Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: January 30, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 2
hahaha i love this! i saw last time that there were 19 reviews and i was like i want more, so i reviewed (Im chelsea, i didnt log in last time) this is a really good story!!
Date: January 30, 2007 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg, if we get a Jim/Pam/Dolphin in the water scene I. Will. Die....not that I'm suggesting anything...
Date: January 30, 2007 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
Love Hot Potato. Great chapter and thanks for the quick update
Date: January 30, 2007 06:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
yay for quick updates! this story is so fun. I love the image of Pam touching Jim's shoulder and feeling him trembling a bit, while he's trying to put on a brave face for the rest of the office. please keep writing! we love this!
Date: January 30, 2007 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
I love that Jim just knows to take her bag. And the line
"No problem. Just know that I expect you to carry all of my luggage for the rest of the trip."
Perfect. So Jim. And I also love that Jim's afraid of flying and that Pam is afraid of dolphins. Methinks they might encounter a dolphin or two in Florida? *fingers crossed*
Author's Response: ack! i wasn't even thinking of a dolphin encounter, but that is so perfect! thank you!
Date: January 30, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ack.! I love Neutral Milk, the most underrated band of the last couple of decades.
Date: January 30, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's stories like this that make me hit the refresh button until the wee hours of the morning.
Date: January 30, 2007 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is such a good read! I'm battling with internal demons not to do any homework until you update again, by roommate is very against this idea. So, for the good me and my GPA, update soooooooon!!!
<3Kelly
Date: January 30, 2007 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 2
awesome please keep writing - i love all the touching!
Date: January 30, 2007 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
joy for neutral milk hotel, my friend!
and joy for the rest of this spectacular story.
continue soon!
Date: January 30, 2007 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
YAY! The plane was such a sweet scene. I like that Jim is the vulnerable one and Pam is taking care of him for a change. Now how do we get these crazy kids into a hotel room? Perhaps Pam/Kelly and Jim/Ryan want to switch?
Date: January 30, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
Amazing amazing story idea!!! I really want to see where you go with this... please update again soon!!! :)
9 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2007 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 2
Once they had made it to their gate though, Pam really began to have fun. Jim taught her the game “Hot Potato”, and soon Pam was giggling uncontrollably. Kevin whipped a pack of cards out of nowhere, and soon several of the office mates and a few of the camera guys were involved in a high-stakes game of poker. So far, the pot consisted of Meredith’s hairbrush, one of Phyllis’ half-used lipsticks, a pack of gum and a handful of change. But as soon as Dwight threw in one of his socks, everyone folded.
I cannot stop laughing at that.
I really like this so far!
Date: January 30, 2007 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
awwwwI can't wait for bathing suit JAM!!!
Date: January 30, 2007 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
totally random idea that corporate would never have gone for but i'm loving it. keep writing please!
Date: January 30, 2007 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
sounds like fun...can't wait for more
Date: January 30, 2007 02:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw! I love it when ever Pam and Jim get forced together for long periods of time with Dwight/Micheal/NoRoy!
Keep writing!
Date: January 30, 2007 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm interested to see what happens next. Like Jim, I'm SO glad warehouse is not included!
Date: January 30, 2007 01:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
You definitely don't need to worry about getting reviews. The idea is great, as is your writing. Please continue!
Date: January 30, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
If you don't continue this, I will find something you cherish and hold it for a ransom, so, I think you'd better weigh your options and just go for a chapter two. Or three, or fifty.
<3 Kelly
Date: January 30, 2007 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really like the start of this, the whole Florida thing has endless possibilities for Micheal craziness.. and Jam, of course. Please continue!
Date: January 30, 2007 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great idea. I can't wait to read this fic and hear about their experiences.
Date: January 30, 2007 11:45 am Title: Chapter 1
This looks promising - keep going! :)