Date: January 30, 2007 11:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this so far! There are so many fun things you could do with this premise...please, definitely keep writing, I can't wait to see what's going to happen! You're building a good characterization of Pam and Jim, too, by the way. :)
Date: January 30, 2007 11:36 am Title: Chapter 1
i usually don`t review, but after reading your story i just felt i had to. please continue writing i think it`s going to be awesome!!!
10 [Report This]Date: January 30, 2007 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1
I can really see the potential of this idea! Please keep going!
Date: January 30, 2007 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
I think you are doing a great job! I would like to see wha happens in Florida. Keep going!
Thanks!
Date: January 30, 2007 09:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is going to be good. There's so many possibilities. Jim and Pam.... on a beach. Yes. Go with it.
Date: January 30, 2007 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1
please keep writing...and soon! i can't wait...*runs away to watch the Booze Cruise episode to control myself*
Date: January 30, 2007 09:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Very promising!
I love this line, its so Michael...
"[Michael] wandered away, going up to groups of people and fishing for compliments."
Date: January 30, 2007 08:56 am Title: Chapter 1
Jim and Pam away for the weekend? Come on..you know we want more.
Date: January 30, 2007 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Keep it coming! I like the sounds of this scenerio. I really liked the part where Jim helped her with her coat/hair....suble sexual tension!
Date: January 30, 2007 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Great first chapter! I like a different take on the Booze Cruise episode, and I also like how you keep with the characters tone and personalities. This is my first review, btw, and I felt it necessary so you can keep writing!