10 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2007 11:41 pm Title: Chapter 11
Eee! This story makes me so gleefully happy! So in-character! Great dialogue! I really think that Pam in a bikini might be the death of Jim. And Drunk!Angela is fabulously done. Alright, I'll have to go back and review he earlier chapters some other time! Keep up the wonderful work! So much love. <3
Date: April 24, 2007 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 11
YES! This is going to be hiliarious...I can't wait for Ultimate Chicken Fighting! And Angela's smack talk: "Heathens!" was perfect.
Date: April 24, 2007 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 11
Ninconpoop! What took you so long to post this chapter! I've been dying out here!
Date: April 24, 2007 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 11
Jam is love. and this is OH SO PRECIOUS!!! i love this:
"I am your best friend who only has best friend feelings about you, unless you should ever feel more than that for me, in which case you should know that i can't remember a time when i wasn't in love with you."
yes. just... yes. that's exactly what Jim is thinking. simply... wonderful.
Date: April 24, 2007 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 11
Don't ever leave me waiting that long for an update again! <-- that is tough love.
Awesome! I'm so happy you updated! <-- that is regular love.
More soon...please!
Date: April 24, 2007 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 11
Woah I love this. I love it like I love Pam's thighs on Jim's shoulders.
Date: April 04, 2007 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 10
Sigh...I would so do the same thing as Pam if I was lucky enough to see Jim/JK shirtless. And drunk Pam & Kelly are hilarious!
Date: April 04, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Chapter 10
Well, you sucked me in. *chants* Update! Update! Update!
Also, I think I barfed a little when you descibed Dwight in a speedo. But I forgive you.
Date: April 02, 2007 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 10
Jim's shoulders....
*thud*
Date: April 02, 2007 10:41 am Title: Chapter 10
I actually out loud said "yay" when I saw that you had updated. Dont keep me waiting too long now ya hear!
Date: April 02, 2007 05:40 am Title: Chapter 10
ah, drunk people are fun. when they are at that state between sober and drunk off their ass, they are really fun!
Jim shirtless.... okay, just wait like ten minutes while i regain conciousness.
actually, nah, i am going to post this and just enjoy jim shirtless.
Date: April 02, 2007 03:40 am Title: Chapter 10
:D The bikini chapter did NOT disappoint, at all. I love how you had all of Jim, Ryan and Toby's stuttering reactions. Awesome! And Kelly a little jealous but still excited for her.
As a side note, and I'm cringing at how "Angela" I probably sound saying this, but I really don't think it's cool, at all, to slip alcohol to someone who chooses not to drink for moral reasons, and that made me really disappointed in Pam and Kelly. But this is fiction and I should probably lighten up. ;)
Author's Response: thanks for pointing that out, it's something i didn't really consider :P at least with those two, we know it's not something they would normally do if they weren't tipsy.
Date: April 01, 2007 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 10
You have made my night by updating! I loved it. I can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Date: April 01, 2007 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 10
Um, so you pretty much made my night by updating this story! It's always worth the wait for new chapters.
I can't wait to get Jim's POV on the bikini *and* to see what happens when she's up on his shoulders. Best. Fic. Ever.
8 [Report This]Date: April 01, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awesome. This is a lot of fun. Don't wait too long for the next chapter.
Date: March 28, 2007 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please update! I'm checking every day for more beach fun. This was really good.
Date: March 27, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
QUESTION! why haven't you updated. Your killing me here.
Date: March 22, 2007 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
wow... dwight in a speedo.... i need to get that image out of my head and fast
Date: March 22, 2007 08:54 am Title: Chapter 9
First time poster here. I had to write and say that you have nailed the style of the Office. The dialogue is fantastic, you've got the humor down pat, and everything that comes from Dwight's mouth is completely believable. I'm enjoying this so much - partly because it's funny and also the story is so in keeping with the show! Please give us more, and quickly. I can't get any work done!!!
Date: March 22, 2007 12:34 am Title: Chapter 9
Bwahahahaha!!! I doubled over at Dwight in a speedo and Michael "frantically" swimming away! I am in love with this fic! Please write more, soon!
Date: March 21, 2007 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
Okay, the cute awkwardness of Jim and Pam was kind of wiped from my mind by the icky thought of Dwight in a speedo on Michael's shoulders. Now I think I need to bleach my brain. But that was very funny!
Date: March 21, 2007 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 9
Yuck Dwight in a speedo. Now Jim in a speedo I wouldn't mind seeing. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: March 21, 2007 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
hahaha oh Dwight. I could totally hear him saying "Wait for me, Michael!" I LOVE this!!! More!!! Please?
Date: March 21, 2007 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 9
NICEE ! Please JAMMM! I neeeeed JAM!! I loved the if you got it flaunt it part...reminds me of the Producers!
Date: March 21, 2007 11:20 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh, this made me giggle. Dwight in a too-small Speedo? "Meet the boys, everyone!"