10 [Report This]Date: March 04, 2007 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aww, that scene in the hallway was too cute! I loved her drawing him on the beach. I can't wait to see what happens in teh morning. Please update soon! I love this story!
Date: March 03, 2007 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aw, that was a really sweet, pretty chapter.
Date: March 03, 2007 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is amazing. The secrets and the drawing and the sleeping in the hall. Just great! I'm so excited for more of this!
Date: March 03, 2007 11:27 am Title: Chapter 6
That was so sweet. I love that Pam drew Jim in the pose. I can so totally see him in it.
Date: March 03, 2007 07:16 am Title: Chapter 6
aww, Pam's head on Jim's shoulder... Who doesn't love that? [/Jim]
Date: March 03, 2007 07:05 am Title: Chapter 6
that was happy wonderful jamness. yay! and now to deal with real life :(
Date: March 03, 2007 06:59 am Title: Chapter 5
"you better catch me" "always" so amazingly wonderful... off to read the next chapter :)
Date: March 02, 2007 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 6
Soo cute...I can't wait for an update! :)
Date: March 02, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
I was really hoping for some sex on the beach. I mean, come on, isn't Jim in his BOXERS??? Other than that, I definitely enjoyed this, especially Pam drawing Jim and him thinking she "modelized" him. I'm not sure Pam would have said "pop a squat", though.
I have stayed at a Country Inn and the room was fantastic AND they had free Starbucks brand coffee in the lobby, so... yeah, they're pretty great.
What happens next?
Author's Response: Now I feel kind of mean to Country Inn... J.K. Country Inn!
Date: March 02, 2007 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 6
*squee* I love this! Soon Angela and Dwight are going to have to bone and that'll leave Jim and Pam together for the night, right? RIGHT?!
10 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 6
OMG SPEEEEDOOO!!! AHH! Please more more more!! AT least have it for tomoroow so i have something to do!! Love lovee this story! Pam & Jim need to get it onn duddeee !! hah <33 Mucch love
* Em
Date: March 02, 2007 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 6
Dwight in a speedo?!?!?! The mind boogles.......... Awsome story, update soon. :P
Date: March 02, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 6
Bring on the Speedo!
On Jim, not Dwight, please. *shudder*
Loved her drawing him on the beach.
Date: March 02, 2007 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
I think you need a nighttime break here. You started out in Pennsylvania during a normal workday, then got everyone to the airport, then had a long plane ride to Florida followed by a three hour drive. So by the time they get to the trust building exercise it's what, four in the morning? Just a suggestion that you might want to explain the timeline here.
And of course Jim caught her. :D
Author's Response:
i'm not so great at timelines :P or making sense!
sorry about the confusion though, i hope it didn't make the story less enjoyable. i promise to let jim and pam sleep soon!
Author's Response:
p.s. this is how i imagined it:
they leave the office around 9:30 AM
they arrive in vero beach around 5:00 PM
then they do the trust fall after dinner at around 8:00 PM.
maybe it's a little unrealistic, i'm not sure
Date: March 02, 2007 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
A two hour bus ride? From the airport? Either those vans are really slow, or they drove halfway from Miami to Atlanta. Sheesh!
Love Dwight's call signs. And Michael's exasperation with them.
Phyllis's quiet "Oh, Dear"...so in character.
Author's Response:
haha, i was actually incredibly exact about the time there! i mapquested towns that were two hours away from the miami airport and on the coast and that's how i ended up with vero beach. i knew that if i stuffed everyone into a van for two hours, some magic would happen.
and then there's the part where the buses are pieces of crap! :P
Date: March 02, 2007 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 3
I haven't mentioned how much I like your giving Jim a fear of flying. Makes him human, more real, more Everyman. Good idea.
Date: March 02, 2007 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
when security confiscated Dwight’s spud gun, it totally made up for it.
OMG that was so funny. Of course that idiot brought a spud gun to an airport.
I just don’t trust their beady little eyes
Precious!
Date: March 02, 2007 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow, LadyLuck, I'm so impressed with this chapter. There was something really beautiful about the way it was written. Some of the narration just struck me as perfectly and fluidly worded. Really excellent.
Not to mention the fact that the JAM is amazing. I got butterflies a few times just imagining how Pam felt. And you have her state of mind down pat.
So yeah. You pretty much rock.
Author's Response: thank you so much! you make me blush :D
Date: March 01, 2007 01:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Yes! I'm so glad you updated this! I kept checking! So funny and sweet!
Date: February 28, 2007 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is very fun and often sweet :) Keep it up!
Date: February 28, 2007 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 5
I just started reading this today, but I have found it delightful so far. As a previous reviewer has stated, I love that you counterbalance the sweetness of the romantic pairing with the silly humor of our other favorite characters. I will be looking forwards to any future updates, and the poem at the end was certainly motivational for a review.
Date: February 28, 2007 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh thank GOD! I was really starting to worry that you weren't going to continue this story! I've been deeply in love with it ever since Jim had a fear of flying. Please tell me Pam eventually asks Jim about what happened with Packer! I'm so excited to get some more of this! Just awesome! Oh! And the last line
Then, Pam felt a hand slide slowly down to her ass. “Kevin!”
“Sorry,” Kevin muttered.
LOVE it! I love how you took this great sweet Jim/Pam moment and then reminded us of the surroundings. Awesome. Please write fast!!!
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2007 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 5
Hah! Please keep this going! I loved the part w/ Kevin's hand on her ass. Poor Girl. <33 Lovin this!! pleaseeee writeeeee!!!!! =)
10 [Report This]Date: February 28, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude is is going to be GREAT!!!! I can't wait to keep reading! Warm weather, swim suits, JAM. Ah, what a story.
Date: February 28, 2007 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dude is is going to be GREAT!!!! I can't wait to keep reading! Warm weather, swim suits, JAM. Ah, what a story.