10 [Report This]Date: February 15, 2007 11:16 am Title: Chapter 5: He Receives the Gift He Did Not Give.
I really, really like this!! Just as it should be between them!
Author's Response: Oooh, look at this, I can respond to comments! Thanks, Moxie! I'm glad you like it! More to come...
Date: February 14, 2007 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 5: He Receives the Gift He Did Not Give.
This is such a moving line - "I will wait for you until you tell me not to".
And another line I really liked is from your author's notes - "I am eternally grateful for the bounty that has been given me in this charmed life." I know it isn't part of the story or meant to be reviewed, but it just struck me as such a heartwarming statement.
Author's Response: I really liked the waiting comment, too...it felt really *right* when it popped in my head, you know? And, how sweet that you liked the author's note line....Although I am shamed to admit that I was being snarky and sarcastic when I wrote it, even though it is true...I'm just not good at being sweet and earnest....
Date: February 14, 2007 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 5: He Receives the Gift He Did Not Give.
you have the unfortionate knowledge that my breadstick looks like it is growing stuff, as i just sstarted eating as i was writing the review.
anyways, *sigh* business school will air and because the producers are jerks, this won't happen. but at least this was good!
Author's Response:
I'm afraid to ask about the breadstick....Eep!
And thanks for following the story! It's very motivating to think of people reading the installments!
Date: February 14, 2007 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 5: He Receives the Gift He Did Not Give.
This story makes me giddy! I wish this was the script for tomorrow's episode!
Author's Response: If only this had been how it went down.....sigh.