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Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 12:04 pm Title: History Repeating

Very emotional scene for Pam I would think. Jim needs a clue



Author's Response: Thanks for your review. It made me laugh. Jim does need a clue. Thanks again for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 16, 2007 07:17 am Title: History Repeating

Okay, so, my computer decided to break. So, after spending time with computer services, I get back, and damn, a lot of stuff happens on this site in 24 hours.
Gah, so much to catch up on!
Send me an email bugging me to tell you about the dream guy. Because, then I can do it tonight, I hope. I am teaching this evening, but maybe after that...
And maybe later this week, I can do emails and crap for more substance. I was going to do it last night, but then my computer decided to be a jerk, and like, no, you don't own your computer. haha. i control you.
" would like to see you when I’m talking about having lots of sex with you." Totally made me laugh!! Although I kept reading it as loads, not lots. I dunno!
Scarlet wants her mom to be a slut! Wow, good start Scarlet :)
Not that I have experience, but I am almost certain conception is the favorite part of parent hood for most people.
MARK'S MARRYING KAREN!
Jim's clothes smell like Jim. That is the difference. Its all Jimy
Poor Pam... :(. Jim has memories of sex with Karen (eew, it hurts to type that), but Pam has to remember Neil.



Author's Response:

Yeah...by far my favorite line, "would like to see you when I'm talking about having lots of sex with you." Go me!..JK!

And the whole memory of sex with Karen/Neil thing is sooo true to this chapter. Jim is having memories of his past relationship and now Pam is too. It sucks though. I cannot wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be a good one. I think...Thanks again Jess....you know, for reading and emialing me....gah, our club needs to get a new addiction..heheha.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 10:19 pm Title: History Repeating

OH NO!!! WHAT A STUPID MISTAKE, JIM!!! 

he's gonna have some serious sucking up to do, so i'm looking forward to that :)  



Author's Response: You got that right! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: kat1201 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 12:33 pm Title: History Repeating

Ouch. I'd sort of forgotten about Neil too until when Jim got in and then realized what Pam was thinking. Hope Jim makes it up to her. And Mark with Karen? That's not gonna be awkward if they all meet up sometime... Thought the shopping spree was cute with Pam and Scarlet. And I see Jim doesn't mind a baby Halpert for them (they can get started after he grovels enough to Pam for her to let him in to her good graces again). Thanks for updating again! 

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Yeah, it definately adds a little more to the story with Karen and Mark thrown back into the mix. I loved the Pam/Scarlet moment at the store too. I'm trying to find new ways to add those special little moments to each chapter that really let us know that these two girls are definately related. So, thanks for reading and reviewing. It really does mean alot that you keep reading and commenting. Trust me, I notice if Kat has reviewed!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 11:52 am Title: History Repeating

those last few lines made my stomach hurt.  that means it was good...hehe

I havent reviewed in quite a few chapters but I really do enjoy this story!! :) 



Author's Response: Sorry for the stomach ache! Thanks for reviewing. I really do appreciate it! It's always nice to find a faithful reader keep commenting on what the chapter felt like for them. Thanks! Keep reading!

Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15, 2007 11:21 am Title: History Repeating

Uh-oh.

Reviewer: kat1201 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 10:51 pm Title: Conversations

That is so cute! I definitely awwed at Scarlet calling Jim her dad to her classmates. Did Pam think about what her mom said and her reaction to Jim was because of that (or at leat a part of the reason)? She certainly surprised him a bit! But I think he liked her that way... LOL  I love this story and can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response: You picked up on that! Yes, Pam acted that way towards Jim because of her mothers conversation. And yes, I think he liked it that way too! Anywho...you'll see more of that side in later chapters. But, thanks for reading and reviewing. It makes me happy to see people enjoy this story! Keep on reading!

Reviewer: FNB Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 05:09 pm Title: Conversations

I love that she called him her dad!  That is so great!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did! Thanks!

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 03:28 pm Title: Conversations

awww, thats so cute.


Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Keep reading!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Conversations

I so owe you about a bajillion emails. And I will try to get to them this weekend. life is just so crazy right now. So, yeah. I felt the need to tell you that.
Haha, beta was taking forever to get back to you? I really feel guilty, cause I would offer, but I never catch anything wrong, and besides, I know I shouldn't take on something else. But then again, the chance to get a sneak peak... :)
:O) (combo :) and :O) I don't know if you named the cousin Jessica because of me, but in my mind you did and I am so happy about it. Don't tell me the truth and make me loss my happiness, okay. I can just keep being off in my own little lala land about it. And I wanna get married. But I guess I have to have a boyfriend first. *sigh*.
Haha. Pam's mom pressuring her for more kids. Parents are all about the grandkids aren't they. And because school is my life, all I can think of is about how that is what we spent a week talking about. Its like, they were sucessful and they procreated and their children procreated and life and genes go on. I am such a nerd.
All that talk reminded me of something. I was going to mention this in my email also. (I may still depending on my memory) There is a deleted scene (who knows what episode, I don't even remember if it is season one or two), where Pam is staring off in space, and Jim comes up and is like what are you doing. and pam is like, i think i was just staring at my desk. and then jim is like, oh should i leave. and pam is like yeah i think you better. and jim leaves and pam continues staring off in space. i love that scene so funny.
Yeah, Pam is tired... sure. Tired. (try explaining horny to a child.
Scarlet called him dad :). Can I say how HUGE my smile was.
Aww, I guess all good things must come to an end.... well, it better end with (still) happy Jam. And a possible new baby would be nice. Maybe end it at mine (I mean Jessica's) wedding... (and seriously. I don't care if you chose the name Jessica at random. let me be happy :P)
So, those are my thoughts. And hopefully I will give you an email this weekend. Until then, just keep looking at pictures of JK



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you caught my litte shout out to you! I did name her cousin Jessica after you...so, you have every right to be giddy with joy! Bask in the glow. That reminds me, I will have to ask you who your dream man is, so when they go to the wedding, I can add him into the mix.

I love that deleted scene! Hilarious! Jim: Should I go? Pam: Yeah, I think you better. Definately a really cute JAM scene that they left out!

Ha. The one thing that I thought about writing this chapter was how Pam's mother mentions more babies and then Pam is being all lovey dovey with Jim. It's like, why can't she just say she wants another child??? Sometimes I get mad at my own writing because I want to write it another way but for the sake of the character or story, I have to write it the opposite way. So, there will definately be more to this story and even more after Jessica's wedding. There are some happenings in that chapter...so, we can't quite end it there.

Anywho, happy that you reviewed. Hope it made your weekend. I know its taken awhile for an update, but I was too excited to get this story updated that I couldnt wait anymore. Welp, talk to you soon.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 12:54 pm Title: Conversations

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it's the moment we've all been waiting for! "That's my dad"!!!! how precious! i love that you had him overhear her say it to someone else instead of her calling him daddy. it's just so much more genuine and precious! :) i can't seem to stop using exclamation marks. hehe it was wonderful!!! i love it! as far as i'm concerned, you could just continue this forever, keeping us updated with the life of the Halperts: Jim, Pam and Scarlet. plus, i'm sure there'll be more kids? yeah. just never stop writing this fic haha... yep, that's how much i love it. definately one of my favorites.  



Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I love writing this story too! I think there will be a few more surprises in this story to come so keep reading! Thanks again!

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 06:10 am Title: A Slice of Life

It's not cheesy and kids so say cheesy cute things.  Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 03, 2007 04:09 am Title: A Slice of Life

I have a feeling that Thursday night you will be inspired again :). Just cause, a new Office after a 6 week break can do that to you!

Damn, they were about to have some fun when Scarlet interrupted. Kids are really the best birth control, arne't they!

Wow, discipling kids is hard. Specially when they start to cry! :(!

I don't care how mny cheesy lines from Scarlet there are, that was just too sweet!!!

Reviewer: slpchic Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 10:49 pm Title: A Slice of Life

how cute!

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Lost Love

this was my favorite chapter so far, I really loved the last Jim/Scarlett interaction.

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:37 pm Title: A Slice of Life

too cute! There is nothing wrong with ending chapters with a Scarlet line!  This chatper hit my grief bone too!  Lovely job! Also on a side note, principle is spelled principal in a school setting.  Just thought I'd let you know! :) I heart this story!

Reviewer: kat1201 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 01:31 pm Title: Swingin'

Aw. I felt for Jim a bit there since he's trying to fit in and be a new dad and all. But I'm sure Scarlet will come around and love him too. Thank you for the new chapters! I'm really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 06:17 am Title: Swingin'

OMG, that Jon Anderson song gives me chills!  I can't decide whether I'm impressed or revolted that Jim knows country music...

Author's Response: Hahaha. I love that song too. My mother was actually the one to intiate it when we were learning to swing when we were younger. Now that my sister has children, we can definately hear my mom out there with the girls singing it to them on the swingset. My two year old neice even knows most of the song. It's adorable. So, I just had to add it!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 05:24 am Title: Swingin'

Oooh! Two chapters in a day! Even though I got the second chapter the next morning. It made my morning better.
I am having issues typing, so hopefully I catch all the mistypes in this.
Kids can get tired swinging? I thought I only got tired pushing them. The little song I sing my 20 month nieghbor on the swing is much less cool. It goes "one little two little three little dudes four little five little six little dudes seven little eight little nine little dudes ten little dudes are you" sometimes using duderoos instead of dudes.
Aww poor Scarlet. Yeah, death is a pretty hard topic to understand when you are that young.
Scarlet will learn Jim is her father soon. Cause he is an awesome father.

Reviewer: WildBerryJam Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 10:12 pm Title: Swingin'

Two posts in one day?  So special!! I love Scarlet and Jim and Pam and just everything you write.  Seriously, awesome.  Can't wait for more again!

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 07:06 pm Title: Lost Love

Hey I am just decided to read this story! I love love love it so far, I'm only on chapt 1!! It's going to take forever to read the whole thing, but I've got time! =) Rating it a 10! Scarlet, what a beautiful name.... I'm sure if she's Pams daughter shes lovely!

Author's Response:

Thanks for tuning in! It's been up for a while now and I'm glad to see that some people are just now discovering it! So, thanks for reading and there will be more to it soon so keep reading!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 01, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Reunion

is it bad that i actually gasped with happiness when i saw this was posted (yay for betas getting it back to you!)
aww, pam is better with jim. aww
this chapter ended too soon :(. makes me sad. thats it. no more LLOFC emails to you until you write more!

Reviewer: Alamos Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 08:46 pm Title: Lost Love

I am not finished w/ this story. I am truly enjoying it. I can totally picture eveything.

 

 

Reviewer: gotkona Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26, 2007 12:59 pm Title: Intruder

Poor Jim. The smell is pretty awful.

Reviewer: Pamela Beesley Signed [Report This]
Date: March 25, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Intruder

I just rediscovered this wonderful story, and I'm really happy to see how it has progressed.  I have to admit I was worried when I saw that "Intruder" followed the chapter in which Karen called Jim on his honeymoon.  I was so worried there would be more Karen drama, and somehow she would be the Intruder.  Thank god it was a skunk. ;)

As far as favorite parts go, there are oh so many.  I really like the special moments between Jim and Scarlet.  I also love how different Jim is with Pam than what we've learned about Neil.  I especially love the thought of future little Halperts, and hope that makes it into the story. 

 



Author's Response: Thanks for responding! I appreciate you reading! Thanks again and keep looking for more posts to come!

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