Date: February 28, 2007 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 3
there definitely needs to be more of this. i really like your characterization. everything seems realistic and not rushed. i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks! For me all these characters get so caught up in the drawn out that it is hard to write a story in which their actions are anything but. I don't want to rush them to a happy ending I feel like the story hasn't taken them to yet. But its coming at somepoint! Thanks for the review
Date: February 28, 2007 12:27 am Title: Chapter 3
Yes, please keep going. It not only seems realistic, but I'm verrry (/Jim) interested in what happens next.
Author's Response: Yes! Thanks:) I have the next two chapters almost done so I promise to have them up soon. I'm just saying, I think its time for a little courage and honesty from everyone.