Date: March 05, 2007 08:58 am Title: Chapter 4
"The Big Lebowski" and the coconut army just floored me, here. Hee!
Author's Response: Haha yay! Thanks :)
Author's Response: Oh also, I love your bookmarks..
Date: March 02, 2007 08:28 am Title: Chapter 4
You are demanding.
Who knew I could write haiku.
It surprises me.
I still enjoy this.
These two are not doing well.
They should break up soon.
Author's Response: Wow I don't think I've ever liked anyone more than I like you in this very moment. Please don't be scared. Seriously, awesome haiku. I really appreciate you reviewing!! And don't worry, there are two chapters left. I'm pretty sure we all suspect where this is headed.
Date: March 02, 2007 06:16 am Title: Chapter 4
i love this. you actually make me feel bad for Karen. my heart breaks for her situation. she just got stuck in the middle of something bigger. and they're being so honest! it's wonderful!
Author's Response: aww yay! Thank you so much! That is exactly what I am going for and I'm so glad to read that it is coming across. For all of its problems their relationship has been so mature in so many ways and I like to think that even in the heat of conflict they wouldn't lose that. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 02, 2007 05:30 am Title: Chapter 4
this is really great. i especially liked the desert island flashback what a great way to tie the two scenes together. i can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I've always wanted to write a backstory for the Bridget Jones' dvd. I have the last two chapters almost done! I just want to finish tweaking before I put them up.
Date: March 02, 2007 03:44 am Title: Chapter 4
I've been following this story, but realize I've never reviewed. Really enjoying it - I like that you gave Karen some backstory (makes her more accessible/sympathetic than even on the show.) And your Jim seems very Jim-ish - especially like their desert island convo (coconut army was too funny.) And how subtle, but clear it was when he explains his situation with Pam simply by saying It wasn't just a kiss. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
And your Jim seems very Jim-ish
That's the greatest compliment ever and very kind. Thanks so much for this review Colette!!