10 [Report This]Date: February 17, 2009 11:36 pm Title: Consequences
LMAO at the ending, that was excellent.
10 [Report This]Date: November 12, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Consequences
awww is all i can say =))
Date: April 12, 2007 01:47 pm Title: Consequences
So, a bit late in FINALLY reading this last chapter (at least, it seems it to me).... but there is tis thing called life, and it really was just screwing with me recently. So, now I get to read. YAY!
AND WOWZA, this is a long one... may be all I can do to finish it before class!
YAY! Its Dwight. This can only mean all sorts of fun stuff to follow - ham radio, he knows his address (stalker :P)
Why does Dwight nee two crowbars? Or do I not want to know?
And its so odd, but I mean, yes, Dwight is completely in character for all of this, but the one WORD that made it seem so Dwighty was that "Oh" I got all sorts of Dwight from those two letters.
I loved the fact he questioned whether it was Roy!
Don't worry Pam, I am pathetic enough that you have beaten me with number of First dates and sexual encounters.
I have to make a statement - NEVER MENTION SWISS ARMY KNIVES. second fic I read today (not that they were updated today as you can tell). But, my biology teacher has compared certain... um... parts of a male's body (okay, a male insects) body to a swiss army knife, and I cant get that image out of my head, so now every time I read it I start laughing and get all weirded out. And so, I will shut up now because that is quite possibly going to scare you.
I have an idea of wht Dwight whispers...
okay, I didn't thin Dwight said that, but it is even more something dwight would say than what I was thinking!
This is so the best story ever. And I may have said this about other stories, but I am pretty sure I am telling the truth, and will stick to that decision until after my class.
and even though it was so long, it read so quickyl, it was just great
Date: April 12, 2007 02:18 am Title: Consequences
I have loved this story from the beginning, but your ending just completely blew me away. You capture all the character's voices and emotions SO well.
I love how you didn't have Jim and Pam fall into each other's arms after she came over. You made it so believable. You really captured Jim's anger/hurt/frustration and Pam's indecisiveness/fear/guilt, and yet the story flowed from tension and angst to just pure lovely so seamlessly. The fact that you can do this in 8 chapters and have it not seem contrived gives me hope that the writers of the show will be able to do the same thing by the end of the season. Please... Please... Please... Please!
The way you used Dwight was perfect. Its been said already, but I just wanted to reiterate.
Oh, and you made me remember why I love Jim so much... I was starting to forget.
Date: April 11, 2007 09:12 am Title: Consequences
*giggles*
Hee!!
The idea of Jim just pedaling his way over to Pam's apartment is just one of the cutest and overly romantic thing ever.
Also, I think I'm just completely in love with Dwight. 110% in LOVE.
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: April 10, 2007 04:03 pm Title: Consequences
Okay, Dwight was just awesome in this and I love how his words come back to amuse them in what could have otherwise been a super serious scene. This whole chapter made me happy!
Date: April 10, 2007 12:56 pm Title: Consequences
I totally adore the interaction between Jim and Dwight. You have Dwight's voice down pat here and the way that Jim would interact with him. And,
"You know my address?” Jim asks, frowning.
“You sleep with a Ham radio on?” Pam adds, because that strikes her as the weirder detail."
This is great! I love the way that the three of them interact, it is spot on! And Dwight taking her back into the house, adorable!!! You know I have such a soft spot for caring, though odd and inappropriate, Dwight. And seriously the tool belt with canteens and crowbars is so Dwight and is hysterical, I can totally see it!
“This is a safe space. He can’t harm you here. And if he tries, I will incapacitate him with a series of Goju Ryu Karate moves, and then finish him off with my nunchucks. If that fails, spud gun.”
This may be the most wonderful thing Dwight has ever said. I think he really does care about Pam and like that he's here to protect her.
“I, for example, worship my girlfriend like the petite goddess she is.”
ROCK ON!
"Because I can stay the night and guard the front door.”
That is so Dwight!!!!
Ok so I can't pull out my favorite parts of the rest because I feel like everything from when he gets to her apartment till the end is perfection. I love how he tries to talk to her between kisses. It shows his desperation and passion and frankly made me a little weak in the knees. You really captured a romantic moment for JAM and I for one really enjoyed it from start to finish.
Speaking of, I know there is an epilogue to come, but I want to tell you right now that I think this story has been simply awesome and it is bar none one of my favorites on MTT! I know that you've worked very hard on this and you should be very proud. And you have to keep writing....just saying.
Date: April 10, 2007 10:37 am Title: Consequences
Good ol' Dwight. The injection of his own special brand of weirdness really made this chapter for me. Visual Inspection! HA!
Date: April 10, 2007 09:22 am Title: Consequences
eeeeeeeee. oh just lovely. Funny and sexy, and perfectly in character. I really love this story.
Date: April 10, 2007 07:21 am Title: Consequences
I loved, loved your use of Dwight in this chapter. It was perfect! So in character. And the ending was all we could ever hope for. Excellent job, great story.
Date: April 09, 2007 10:58 pm Title: Consequences
Wow! There were so many good things about that chapter... I just loved it! Dwight was so good! And such a surprise I did not expect! The Dwight dialogue was superb. And the 'visual inspection'? Excellent! I have enjoyed this story so much! Thanks! And this was just a great ending. Excited for the epilogue!
Date: April 09, 2007 10:31 pm Title: Consequences
Aww, yay! You have their voices down! I really loved this exchange:
"'Being a volunteer sheriff is a way of life. I will always be a volunteer sheriff. It’s not an identity that one can just abandon by returning a uniform and a badge,' Dwight replies importantly.
Jim squints at him.
'Pretty sure it is though.'"
Haha!
Date: April 09, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Consequences
Your Dwight voice was perfect! I was laughing so hard when I realized it was him on the other side of the door, and then I was touched at how concerned he was for her when they were in the living room. Well done!
Date: April 09, 2007 09:34 pm Title: Consequences
That was just the perfect ending to that story. It was so endearing that Dwight wanted to protect them. And I loved the happy Jim/Pam because they deserve it!
Date: April 09, 2007 09:04 pm Title: Consequences
Dwight is so good in this; you really have him down. I can just see him saying these things. Jim's interaction with Dwight is so perfect as well.
I love Jim kissing Pam while walking her backwards toward the bedroom. I just had the irreverent thought that the bedroom could be at the front of the house and he didn't notice the door, and he walked her to the linen closet. That would change the mood like... sneezing in hot chocolate, I guess (or am I mixing up fanfics?). Desperately gasping out a word or two between kisses was... niiice. I actually think Jim would have had Pam's address memorized and would have found it out even when he was in Stamford. And would have know exactly where it was from driving by at least once. It's only human nature. (Or... just me.)
Ghost reference. Just had to make sure you knew I got it. I'm totally one of the cool kids. Or, well, one of the old people who saw that in the theater. When it came out.
Look forward to the epilogue!
Date: April 09, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Consequences
Holy DAMN this is an AMAZING chapter. *dies of happy*
Seriously, this is AMAZING. Just...AMAZING. And I love it, and I love Dwight and his spud gun and Jim and his hotness and Pam and her awesomeness and EVERYTHING about this.
Date: April 09, 2007 07:35 pm Title: Consequences
love, love, love it, shan21! i also loved your new one, so i hope you keep it going. thank you!
Date: April 09, 2007 06:44 pm Title: Consequences
that was a PERFECT ending, Dwight is amazing...
awesome job *adds to favorites*
Date: April 09, 2007 06:25 pm Title: Consequences
Good to the last drop. Oh wait, there's an epilogue - soon, I hope! Especially liked Jim racing over on his bike, and trying to explain, but not being able to stop kissing her. By the end of this chapter, I seriously wanted to take a bite out of him...so sweet and sexy and very, very Jim. And hooray for a Dwight cameo - like a bonus gift.
Date: April 09, 2007 06:03 pm Title: Consequences
Too, too great. So much awesomeness I think my head will explode. Seriously. Between the bike riding, broken sentences, and all around Jamminess..... yeah.
All I can think about when I read this is how the ending was born out of an off-handed joke I said about bikes and our insane e-mail series that followed that........ heh.
I can't wait for the epilogue!
Also *rises fingers in air* I love your Dwight-isms. Very true to character. And you know my feelings about Jim's investigating.... ;)
Date: April 09, 2007 06:02 pm Title: Consequences
Oh Shan. Bravo. Perfect Jim and Pam dialogue - and also...because of Dwight. :) Love this. Cannot wait for the epilogue.
Date: April 09, 2007 06:00 pm Title: Consequences
WOW - nice! that was just freaking hot! and i love what dwight whispered to jim -that is SO perfect and so in character. haha!!! loved it. and would love an epilogue!!
Date: April 09, 2007 05:47 pm Title: Consequences
Cute cute cute. Love Dwight in this. So hilarious and yet comforting. And Jim...oh i love Jim. He rode his biike. How come no guys mapquest my house and ride their bikes over for me? Haha. Excellent job. Looking forward to the epilogue.
Date: April 09, 2007 05:44 pm Title: Consequences
Love this chapter! The passion and broken sentences at the end when Jim comes back? Amazing! Can't wait for more! --CH
Date: April 09, 2007 05:09 pm Title: Consequences
THANK GOODNESS it was Jim and not Roy at the door! I loved that Dwight was so nice (weird but nice) to Pam, it reminded me of the inventory night so much. This has been SUCH a great story, I can't believe it's already time for an epilogue...but I can't wait to read it!