Date: April 16, 2007 02:13 pm Title: Epilogue
one word ... awesome! This was a really great story - you write the characters so well and i love the part when jim shows up at pams door and she blurts out "i love you" - beautiful!!
Date: April 16, 2007 01:08 pm Title: Epilogue
So so wonderful. This entire fic has just been brilliantly perfect from start to finish. You've got to characters captured so spot on.
Now I can only hope that it works out this nicely on the show.
Date: April 16, 2007 09:58 am Title: Epilogue
Perfect, perfect epilogue and ending to a great story. Perfect resolution. I am completely contented. Loved it!
Date: April 16, 2007 09:35 am Title: Epilogue
GReat conclusion. Full of fluffy happyness and good endings all around. Have fun in Europe!
Date: April 16, 2007 09:29 am Title: Epilogue
yay!!! Squee happyness all over monitor.
Date: April 16, 2007 08:29 am Title: Epilogue
This story was great. Thank you so much for it.
Date: April 16, 2007 07:41 am Title: Epilogue
Great conclusion--I love the description, and Kelly's "longest word in the English language" was hilarious! Well done!
-CH
10 [Report This]Date: April 16, 2007 07:37 am Title: Epilogue
Have fun in Europe, I mean, if possible without internet and fanfic. But it is Europe, so maybe...
Sounds like those two had a good night :)
That is a lot of eggs they are eating. But, sex does burn calories... and I have a feeling that they are going to continue doing a lot of that.
Okay, um, so is it wrong to want to quote every line in this as making me giggle/smile/be happy/i love? because then the review would be longer than the story... and I am not sure. But, if I could, i would.
Except I was really really really glad that it was next to the stove, not on the stove, because that wouldn't have been a good ending... pam being rushed to the hospital for burns along her backside.
I was wondering why it had a horizontal scroll. And then I got to Kelly.
:D:D:D
Date: April 16, 2007 07:17 am Title: Epilogue
Oh Shan! This was just wayyyy too great. You know you rock hardcore and here are a few reasons why (from this chapter anyways!)
1) "Just then a wild cougar growled" - this line had me laughing out loud and I was like What?! Did she turn this into a bad!fic? Then I kept reading and it made sense. Hilarious!
2) The glowing belly button line was just.... so Jim.
3) Kelly's new word for the dictionary is hysterical! I couldn't even read the whole thing it's so long. I can't wait until THAT word becomes part of the show ;)
4) I love the aftermath and how you tied up the pieces with Karen and made her not let Jim say the cliched break up lines.
I'm going to miss beta'ing this!! You must now come up with another masterpiece I can read this summer when you arrive back in the states!! Get on that Shan ;) (twss)
Anyways, after what seems to be the longest review ever, to sum up: you're amazing, I loved it, and have fun on vacation!!!