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Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 04:13 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

Well, Moxie...what can I say that I haven't already said? This story continues to astound...and now that it's heating up, it even more delicious. I think I'm more excited about their date tonight than Jim is. Keep it coming, sister!

Reviewer: StarryDreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 03:21 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

Girl, you totally know how to build up suspence!  I can't wait to see what happens at their "date".

Reviewer: kgarrett Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 02:19 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

This story makes me so happy. I love it! I love the banter between them again. You did a great job. Can't wait for 7:00pm to roll around.

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 01:55 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

oh MY goodness! PAMELA! of course, i don't blame her one bit. who wouldn't want to "fondle" Jim Halpert? haha. lovely chapter. isn't there someway you can just devote your life to writing this, so we have a continuous stream to the end? or does it have to end? i mean, they're pretty great together. i'm sure you could find something to write about. i love it. just so you know :) 

Reviewer: carebear13178 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 01:00 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

I'm always so excited to read a new chapter, until I realize at the end that I have to wait for another one. :) This chapter was sooo adorable.

Reviewer: Jen74 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

So so many great things about this chapter...

<>The way that Karen and Jim parted ways amicably.  I know that in an earlier chapter I might have sung a Cartman song slandering Karen, but I'm glad she went out this way.

<>Pam grabbing his ass?  Go Pam!

And any fic that can slip in the word parseltoungue is a-ok in my book!! 

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Reviewer: sorano916 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 12:36 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

Heh... 195 more reviews until the squirrel tatoo... Geez... one more chapter... cripes' sake, Moxie! The breakroom scene was hilarious! 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 12:13 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

Wonderful!  I especially liked the parking lot kiss and the scene with Oscar and Kevin!

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 12:02 pm Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

ugh, can I say that I'm annoyed by Pam, I'm sure Jim finds her adorable, but I just want to strangle her! I'm usually the biggest pro-pammer out there, but seriously...he's been crazy about you for YEARS and not even a kiss? Come on! Jim you can do better! Call me after I give birth, we'll get coffee and I'll put out :)

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 11:59 am Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

HOLD IT?  What red-blooded woman would NOT want to kiss Jim?  Clearly, Pam must have a government-sponsored  mind-controlling nano-robot infection of some sort!  (Dork groper!)

"Shall we go back to the break room or shall I show you here?" Ok, now you have officially broken my brain with sexy Jam banter.

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 11:53 am Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

YEAH!  Happy times are here again :)  Except for the impending 12 Labours of Halpert-cles.  But you know, all in good, sassy fun!

Reviewer: WalkInLove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2007 11:43 am Title: Full of high sentence, but a bit obtuse

Ahhh!  This was a refreshing treat in the middle of the day.  I can't list all the things I love about this chapter here, because the review would be too long.  So, here are just a few:  I love that after the kiss, she simply commented on his tie.  I tie that Karen hated, no less.  I love that Kevin and Oscar let Jim know that he and Pam weren't as good at hiding their feelings all those years as they thought they were.  I love that Pam isn't afraid to pull out the big guns while flirting with Jim.  But mostly I love you for writing and sharing this amazing story.  I, along with many others, will be sad to see it come to an end!

Reviewer: kat1201 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 01:44 pm Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

Just now getting to review, but I really loved all of Pam's punishments for Jim! So fitting too. I'm glad that things seem to be working out between them. And that kiss at the end was so sweet after all they've been through. Thanks!

Reviewer: nbyevu Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 10:49 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Ok, I'm pretty sure I love this story more than anything I've ever read. I started reading it around midnight last night and wouldn't go to bed til I finished...even though I knew I had to get up early! I hope the story isn't over!!

Reviewer: HereComesTreble Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 09:51 am Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

The ending of this chapter is definitely what made all the waiting worth it. I can't wait to see where you go from here.

Reviewer: naomi_dylan Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 09:50 am Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Discovered this story at about 3am... and couldn't quit reading until I'd read it all!  So I'm exhausted, but it was worth it. :-)

Reviewer: Emmaline Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 06:23 pm Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

Love it Love it Love it!!! I read through Ch1-16 today, I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: agd300 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27, 2007 12:37 pm Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

*sigh*

That's all I've got for this chapter!  Update soon!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2007 12:52 pm Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

Aw, they're so on the right track. And I can't wait to see Jim paying his penance, and how the other IRCers respond to his confession! :D

Reviewer: mitahrogers Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26, 2007 11:25 am Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

thank goodness for fluff. we (and they) deserve a lot of it, and I will love every second. Brilliant idea with the tasks, can't wait to see what Loiken says when he finds out about Jim.

Reviewer: JamIsLove Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 02:58 pm Title: When the evening is spread out against the sky

Just keeps getting better and better :) Great work. Pleeeeease get the rest out quickly *pouts*

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 08:59 am Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

Woo! Breakfast dates! Jammy kisses! Hot ties!

A triumph of fluffy happiness. The tasks are very cute, too. Love!

Reviewer: belsum Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 08:32 am Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

So perfect. The conversation, Jim's nervousness and confidence, their care in their appearance, the punishments, everything was so perfectly in character. I can totally see things playing out like this had the show taken this turn. Nice job!

Reviewer: lama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 07:06 am Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

*Happy sigh*  I wish that could have been MY morning!  Very happy to see the hot tie make its appearance, and I love love LOVE Jim's punishments.  So looking forward to his coming out in the IRC.  THAT will be LEGENDARY.

Reviewer: JinRain Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 25, 2007 05:36 am Title: After the cups, the marmalade, the tea

Great ending. I really like the idea of the tasks, it really added renewed interest in this story where it seemed it was just tying up loose ends. Great job.

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