Date: March 07, 2007 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Um, YES, you should continue working on this. You may stop for sleeping (better than not), and drinking (bottled water if you're evolving, grape soda if you're not), and... well, when you have a chance, I'll happily read more and review.
SO interesting that you had Pam call Karen. And... it seems Karen might have some trouble getting Jim back home with her. I sense some fun (for us) brewing...!
Date: March 07, 2007 09:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, you should work on this more.
And MAJOR props to you for having Pam call Karen. I actually think that it's something that Pam would do, just to avoid bringing up all of it with Jim.
I'm looking forward to the rest!
Thanks.
cheers.
--Lex
Date: March 07, 2007 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, I would like to know how honest Jim will be when Karen's curiosity gets to her on that long car ride home. I mean, who needs games?
10 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2007 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes, you should keep going!!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 07, 2007 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hell yes, continue!!!
Date: March 07, 2007 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this so far! this is the first fanfic I've read that has Pam calling Karen after cocktails, rather than Jim-- I think it's a really interesting idea. I definitely think you should continue!
Date: March 07, 2007 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oooh, the thought of Pam calling Karen has never even entered my mind. Interesting thought! I hope you continue with this!
Date: March 07, 2007 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, yes, continue, do....I like the shifting second person....a Karen internal debate (what to say to Jim?) would be a good next one, if you are stuck.....
Date: March 07, 2007 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
keep working on it.... i hadn't expected her to call karen... i hate hiatuses