Date: March 14, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
I followed the link from ff.net over here - why were you in my favourites there but not here? I'll be sure to remedy that right away.
You take on post-Cocktails is quite original. Pam calling Karen instead of Jim was quite simply inspired.
Date: March 13, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
"It’s so much easier to just let go when she pulls you down towards her." - I'm enjoying this story, and this line is just really nice.
I think you did pretty well with the voices. I didn't see any problems with them, and I generally notice that sort of thing.
I am loving these post-Cocktails stories. I just can't get enough of them. I look forward to more.
Date: March 13, 2007 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's hard to believe a chapter I'm sure the *readers* love immensely could cause you so much grief, but oh well - as you should know, I adored this, I loved this, I can't stop smiling after reading this. Resolution! I love the description of their kiss, or the part before their kiss, and I love them in this chapter - so in-character, talking, chatting, smiling...her crying, him comforting.
Aw.
Can't wait for an update!! I love this story!