Date: March 19, 2007 04:30 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sorry about that last comment. Good story! I like the Jim strong-and-brave thingy (i no it wasn't in this chapter). And I like that nobody gets beatan up. Write another chapter please!
Date: March 19, 2007 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 5
noooooo bad roy no cookie
Date: March 19, 2007 05:51 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh, wow. I sure wasn't expecting Roy to expect to get back together with Pam after THAT, but then again, he is Mr. Oblivious, so it shouldn't surprise me. Boy, I can't wait to see how he reacts to Pam's news! THAT will blindside him for sure.
I love the image of Jim sitting there, hands on the armrests, tensed and waiting to jump up if Pam needs him. *sigh*
Great chapter. Can't wait for more!
Date: March 18, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 5
Ugh! Roy, she said it's over!!! Poor Pam, has to dump him AGAIN? (And she'd better say no, wingwoman!)
In reality, Karen and Jim are broken up, and Pam and Roy are broken up (I think she said this is over and he said this is SO over), Jim would probably hang out at Pam's a bit longer that night. Maybe not stay over yet, but they are both single and in the same town - I think they'd at least bask in each other's glow for a while. (I actually don't mean that in a smutty way necessarily.)
I'll watch for the next chapter!