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Reviewer: Snarkland Signed [Report This]
Date: April 22, 2007 06:28 am Title: Sandalwood

I love this.  You've captured everything they're going through, both internally and externally.  I love this last chapter especially because Jim NEEDS to know she wants him physically, just like he, the man, has always wanted her.  It's heartwrenching and wonderful.

Please continue with this fic.  It's very well written and I definitely want to read the rest!

Snarkland



Author's Response: To me there seemed to be an asexual nature to the relationship. Need to be fixed, so I fixed it.

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