Reviews For Survivor: Scranton
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Reviewer: Cate the Great Signed [Report This]
Date: April 14, 2007 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

OMG! This is amazingly ridiculous! Please, please, please continue!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: April 12, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 2

Hahaha, the *jungle* gym, and the innocent helpless kittens, are hilarious. Can't wait to see what else you come up with!

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 2

LadyLuck, I think you had a cut-and-paste problem; your first couple of lines are from further down...?

And there were just a couple of errors/typos - the DVDs should be calling "our name", not "out name", and it's "rarin' (as in raring) to go".  "Rearing to go" is a common misspelling, but it really is "raring".

I'm enjoying this story.  I really liked  all the Angela aspects - checking out Dwight, bringing out the kittens and being so distraught about it, etc.  

The kiddie pool was funny too.  Dwight's reaction reminded me of last week when he realized (immediately) that the Sheriff's citation (or whatever) was a kiddie thing!  Nice parallel!

Dwight would be good on the challenges and fire-starting (probably).  Social skills?  Yeah, not so much. 



Author's Response: oh, the first couple of lines are the chapter summary; it's what shows up underneath the chapter in the table on contents.  unfortunately, it also shows up right above the story so it looks really awkward :P

Reviewer: office_romance Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

You have to let us know how Dwight does on his challenges! This is fun! I like that Jim and Pam are up to their pranks again!

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 2

LOL ! I'm loving the kiddy pool && the streamers. And the fact Jim and Pam are happy. And the kittens. And the jungle gym. Damn it, I love the whole thing!!! =)

Reviewer: takemyhandx Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 10, 2007 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

 LOL ! Love this! It makes me laugh

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2007 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

Cute story. 

It would be fun to see Dwight on Survivor, although he wouldn't make it through even one tribal council.  (The tribe has spoken.)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2007 08:10 am Title: Chapter 1

You better keep going, that was so hilarious!

Reviewer: Snoznoodle Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11, 2007 05:09 am Title: Chapter 1

Wow! Sounds great! Wot a funny idea - u HAVE to keep going! LOVING it!

Reviewer: Semby Signed [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 1

Heh. This is a very fun concept! I love how seriously Dwight takes it. And Jim's horrible phony accent is hilarious :)

Reviewer: sharky Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: March 10, 2007 11:46 am Title: Chapter 1

Only Dwight would actually send in a tape like that great. Very cool!

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1

Dwight would totally try out for Survivor.  LOL.  I said this before, and I'll say it again:  thank you for bringing "old" Jim and Pam back!  Yea.  This was such a nice little story.  I'm glad I got to check it out before you posted it!!

Reviewer: Angryhaiku Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09, 2007 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 1

Hee! This was really fun to read -- mostly because your Dwight voice was very accurate. I hope you do decide to follow up.

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