Reviews For And it Could Have All Turned Out Differently
Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 02:25 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
Date: March 16, 2007 02:25 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
I quite like it! I will be following up on later chapters :)
Reviewer: Jamster Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 02:13 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
Date: March 16, 2007 02:13 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
I can't believe it!
I absolutely fantastically utterly painfully unbearably need to tell you that I thought this story was so...*beams the rest of the review telepathically*
Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 16, 2007 01:00 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
Date: March 16, 2007 01:00 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
Wow. The "And you're still with her why?" is SO perfect. It's just the kind of thing you could say as a joke and then suddenly realize... you mean it seriously.
You've done such a great job making it seem like Jim and Pam are childhood friends. And your last 4 sentences? So good.
(I also sent this telepathically. Please let me know which review reaches you first. Let me know telepathically; I'm testing my powers.)