Date: March 17, 2007 12:46 pm Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
Ooh, very cool. I think this is very true to the Roy we know - making an effort to do what he thinks she wants, but still not quite *getting* her and where she's coming from. And Pam's dislike for July and Jim's knowledge of this and Roy's ignorance, was a great detail.
Date: March 17, 2007 10:55 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
I'm really enjoying this look at the way things "might have been" and the subtle (and not) ways you show that even with different circumstances, soulmates are soulmates :) And I can't believe that be-yotch cheated on Jim!!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 09:43 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
I love this story! Sorry I haven' t reviewed sooner, but I just read it today. I love Jim and Pam's friendship, so sweet.
Date: March 17, 2007 09:24 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
Ooh. Thanks for the updates about the two couples. This is engaged bliss at its finest. Is bliss the right word?
I have hopes that these couples will both be OVER at some point soon, as 3 out of 4 of the people involved are dissatisfied. Do not dash my hopes against the rocks. The great and powerful Too Late Kev has spoken.
Oh, and Roy? Such a classy dude. All weddings and honeymoons should be good and cheap.
Date: March 17, 2007 06:45 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
This is really getting interesting. Karen has got to go. So does Roy!
Date: March 17, 2007 12:36 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
Really enjoying the tone of the story so far and I like how you are developing it all. Looking forward to more.