Date: March 20, 2007 02:49 pm Title: Taking a chance on Something Sometime
Hey - this is really good. Keep it up, I'll be reading.
Date: March 20, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Taking a chance on Something Sometime
I really like your view on how dynamics change when both people are presumed "safely taken," and how when she doesn't have to pretend that he's not in love with her, she can take his advice, and he can tell her that Roy is wrong for her without seeming selfish about it...
Date: March 20, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Taking a chance on Something Sometime
Very well done - i like this a lot! Let's get cracking on the JAM though!!!! I like that they can hang out wi/o their fiances worrying - it's like Dawson's Creek or something!! Keep writing!!!
Date: March 20, 2007 10:05 am Title: Taking a chance on Something Sometime
Nice. I like how Jim starts to get her to think about her relationship with Roy. Does Jim really have a clue yet that his relationship is not too great either? I wish he had said "...and what an ass it is"; I would have liked to see Pam respond to that. (Probably another oh, you're so dead!)
Still reading!