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Reviewer: emmyred Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 29, 2007 11:22 am Title: Making Plans

This is a great story - please update soon!

Reviewer: lena76 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 08:07 am Title: Making Plans

I just want to smack the shit out of Karen! Our little Jim is so clueless when it comes to Karen.......she's gonna hurt him & when she does our little Pamster will be there to pick up pieces....right ? :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 07:40 am Title: Making Plans

karen is devious! she is so not right for jim!

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28, 2007 06:36 am Title: Making Plans

Another great chapter!  I like the interplay of Pam and Jim.  You might want to take another quick look at this - there are some formatting and grammatical errors.  Also, it's confusing when you segue to Karen and her illicit affair - maybe consider putting some sort of break in there...

 

Anyway, great stuff!  Can't wait for another chapter :) 

Reviewer: ayla Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 08:29 pm Title: Making Plans

How did I miss this?? Great story, I'm hooked!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 06:48 pm Title: Making Plans

Ooh, Karen is evil!  And I am loving all the references (Will Farrell, Brown, SNL, and on  -- hee!)  

I am eagerly awaiting Karen's comeuppance!! 

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 27, 2007 05:32 pm Title: Making Plans

Your Karen is really skanky.  And the guy she's cheating with is a real class act as well.  Blech for them!  Jim really needs to drop Karen soon.

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