Date: March 22, 2007 10:24 pm Title: Someone to Help You Up When You Fall Down
Evil evil evil Karen! Update soon!
8 [Report This]Date: March 22, 2007 10:10 pm Title: Someone to Help You Up When You Fall Down
so good. This will make it even better when Karen is sent packing, which I hope is where this is going.
Date: March 20, 2007 02:49 pm Title: Taking a chance on Something Sometime
Hey - this is really good. Keep it up, I'll be reading.
Date: March 20, 2007 01:14 pm Title: Taking a chance on Something Sometime
I really like your view on how dynamics change when both people are presumed "safely taken," and how when she doesn't have to pretend that he's not in love with her, she can take his advice, and he can tell her that Roy is wrong for her without seeming selfish about it...
Date: March 20, 2007 12:21 pm Title: Taking a chance on Something Sometime
Very well done - i like this a lot! Let's get cracking on the JAM though!!!! I like that they can hang out wi/o their fiances worrying - it's like Dawson's Creek or something!! Keep writing!!!
Date: March 20, 2007 10:05 am Title: Taking a chance on Something Sometime
Nice. I like how Jim starts to get her to think about her relationship with Roy. Does Jim really have a clue yet that his relationship is not too great either? I wish he had said "...and what an ass it is"; I would have liked to see Pam respond to that. (Probably another oh, you're so dead!)
Still reading!
Date: March 17, 2007 12:46 pm Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
Ooh, very cool. I think this is very true to the Roy we know - making an effort to do what he thinks she wants, but still not quite *getting* her and where she's coming from. And Pam's dislike for July and Jim's knowledge of this and Roy's ignorance, was a great detail.
Date: March 17, 2007 10:55 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
I'm really enjoying this look at the way things "might have been" and the subtle (and not) ways you show that even with different circumstances, soulmates are soulmates :) And I can't believe that be-yotch cheated on Jim!!!
10 [Report This]Date: March 17, 2007 09:43 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
I love this story! Sorry I haven' t reviewed sooner, but I just read it today. I love Jim and Pam's friendship, so sweet.
Date: March 17, 2007 09:24 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
Ooh. Thanks for the updates about the two couples. This is engaged bliss at its finest. Is bliss the right word?
I have hopes that these couples will both be OVER at some point soon, as 3 out of 4 of the people involved are dissatisfied. Do not dash my hopes against the rocks. The great and powerful Too Late Kev has spoken.
Oh, and Roy? Such a classy dude. All weddings and honeymoons should be good and cheap.
Date: March 17, 2007 06:45 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
This is really getting interesting. Karen has got to go. So does Roy!
Date: March 17, 2007 02:36 am Title: Back on Track
Line.
LOL, I couldn't resist. I love this so far - so I'm going to keep readig lol.
Date: March 17, 2007 12:36 am Title: Holding it Together (when it wants to fall apart)
Really enjoying the tone of the story so far and I like how you are developing it all. Looking forward to more.
Date: March 16, 2007 02:25 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
I quite like it! I will be following up on later chapters :)
Date: March 16, 2007 02:13 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
I can't believe it!
I absolutely fantastically utterly painfully unbearably need to tell you that I thought this story was so...*beams the rest of the review telepathically*
Date: March 16, 2007 01:00 pm Title: She makes me Laugh
Wow. The "And you're still with her why?" is SO perfect. It's just the kind of thing you could say as a joke and then suddenly realize... you mean it seriously.
You've done such a great job making it seem like Jim and Pam are childhood friends. And your last 4 sentences? So good.
(I also sent this telepathically. Please let me know which review reaches you first. Let me know telepathically; I'm testing my powers.)
8 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 03:28 pm Title: Prologue
Loving this story so far. You've done a great job of capturing all of the characters personalities so well. Can't wait to read more! (oh and can we share Jon Stewart? Pretty please!)
10 [Report This]Date: March 14, 2007 01:03 pm Title: Back on Track
Awe.... Jim is so sweet :) Roy on the other hand...not so much. I really love this story. Feel free to just update every half hour or so ;)
Date: March 14, 2007 11:11 am Title: Back on Track
Hmmm. Art Supplies and Orchids, Toaster Oven and last-minute freebie certificate. Art Supplies and Orchids, Toaster Oven and last-minute freebie certificate. So hard to choose...
I like where you're going with this, or I guess, how you're going with this, because I can't yet be sure of where. (Wow, that's a lot of words.)
By the way, you've really captured the lameness that is Roy!
8 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2007 09:54 pm Title: Stranger Than Fiction
I love where this is going. That IM conversation was so cute!
Date: March 13, 2007 09:25 pm Title: Stranger Than Fiction
"It was as if Pam had magically appeared to relieve Karen of any obligation to join Jim in his more plebian hobbies." Oh, honey, say buh-bye, go back to NYC, and let Pam and Jim find some NEW hobbies.
Enjoying this story!! More is good!!
Date: March 13, 2007 10:04 am Title: Prologue
Love your chapter end notes. This has such a promising beginning, I can't wait to see how you play it out.
Author's Response: I hope I can live up to the promise. I anticipate a real friendship for them, the kind we all wish we had
Date: March 13, 2007 09:45 am Title: Prologue
I like this so far! This is a really interesting start. Can't wait to see where this goes ... how do Jim and Roy get along in this alterate universe? Do Karen and Pam become friends, or is Karen suspicious of Pam? When do Jim and Pam do the wild monkey? Ooooh, so interesting.
Author's Response: It's going to be a bumpy road, but I'll give out one spoiler, one of these relationships isn't lasting very long :)
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2007 09:15 am Title: Prologue
Wow I LOVE it already.........!!!! MORE...Please.... I can't wait :)
Author's Response: I've gotten the second part of the 'intro' ready. It gives a little more insight as to who they are all as are people
Date: March 13, 2007 09:14 am Title: Prologue
Oooh, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next. Karen immediately shows a jealous side!
Author's Response: Karen's about to get a lot less jealous then...