Date: March 16, 2007 08:22 am Title: Lies Revealed
Oh no sounds like an angry Karen
Author's Response: Yep... I haven't written her reaction yet, but I think it will be fun fun fun!
Date: March 15, 2007 03:55 pm Title: Lies Revealed
I go to summer camp, and I totally know what you're talking about. =] I still love it though.
But ANYWAYS. You have a good start here - I'm intrigued to see what happens next. More, please!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I love summer camp... most of the time the activites are sorta fun. But, yeah, it gets boring sometimes.
I have more written, so will be posting it tomorrow :)
Date: March 15, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Lies Revealed
No matter how much I hate Karen, I actually feel bad for her about that....I've kinda been in that situation, & I know how she feels! Very nice!! rating it 10!
Author's Response: I know. I think reading these fics here make me a lot more sympathetic towards her.
Date: March 15, 2007 03:45 pm Title: Lies Revealed
I like where this is heading... hope to see more :)
Author's Response: Ihave a bit more written, so will be posting it soon. Thanks!
Date: March 15, 2007 01:19 pm Title: Lies Revealed
pretty cool addition. interested to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks. I have a bit more written, and willbe posting it soon
Date: March 15, 2007 12:47 pm Title: Lies Revealed
I really like your "slow and descriptive" style. I'm finding these very interesting. I like Karen's thought process when she's deciding to go over to Mark's.
I look forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
this review = nearly complete and total happiness on my part :). so seriously, thanks (see, doesn't take a lot to make me happy.
the next two chapters are really really descriptive, and thats all i have written so far. it really develes into jim and jims secret, so hopefully those will be good also.
writing karens thoughts was surprising easy for these chapters. i thought it would be hard since i really don't find myself like karen, but its just, putting myself into her shoes and figuring how why she would act the way she has been, and just sort of going from there.
but yep, hopefully still will have the next chapter up tomorrow if all goes as planned.
thanks again!
Date: March 15, 2007 12:09 pm Title: Lies Revealed
Pam Patch....Dawesome. I really like this so far....
Author's Response:
Haha, thanks. I really liked that phrase, it was ust a random thought I had.
Thanks for the review. more will be posted tomorrow hopefully