Date: March 19, 2007 06:52 pm Title: Mixed Messages
Not at all confusing. Ooh, another chapter! (Runs off to see!)
Author's Response: not a happy chapter was it :(
10 [Report This]Date: March 19, 2007 06:50 pm Title: Mixed Messages
No, it's not confusing one bit! Loved thier inner thoughts! God they need to hook up, BAD. lol<3
Author's Response: Do they ever! Its slow going for those two.
Date: March 19, 2007 12:19 pm Title: Mixed Messages
totally not confusing -- and totally true to character, painfully true to character... Can't wait to see what's next.
Author's Response:
Glad everyone seemed to be able to understand it. Maybe I am just the one that got confused (actually, my beta's really helped!).
I agree, it sucks it is too true to character. Those two... they need a giant shove to tell the truth.
Date: March 19, 2007 10:41 am Title: Mixed Messages
Must....resist....urge...to...smack....fictional....characters......
I so wish that this chapter wasn't in character....but it IS.
Author's Response: You want to slap them too? Good. I think we all need to. Maybe then they would do something about it.
Date: March 19, 2007 08:20 am Title: Mixed Messages
I really wish these chapters were longer. (That's what she said.)
That being said, those two stupid kids. That was like a whole conversation of "Let's see who can hurt who the most without actually being mean." - something they both would totally do. Just going off each other.
By the way, it wasn't confusing at!
Author's Response:
haha. well, normally i do write longer pieces, but for some reason, these come to me in shorter snipbits.
I swear, I think those two are slightly masochistic about each other and two themselves. Its like, lets suffer as much as we can all while injuring the other person. Someone needs to hand them a pack of condoms and lock them in a closet and let them work out their fustrations that way. wow, my mind is so oddly dirty right now.
Date: March 19, 2007 08:18 am Title: Mixed Messages
I can totally see this kind of internal dialogue happening every time Jim and Pam talk.
Just a co-worker? Ouch!
Definitely looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I know, that link hurt me to write even. god, those two are just crazy. now, if only the thoughts were spoken, it would all be so much easier.