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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30, 2007 03:49 pm Title: Misinterpretations

Very sweet.  I think their "confessions" are a little too "wrapped up", if you know what I mean.  Kind of "this is what happened, and then this, and then this", mentioning all the things we fans want them to say.  In reality, I think it would be choppy and interrupted with pauses and the other one saying something, and things would be more understated, not as many points stated.  And could that be any more of a run-on sentence?  Probably not.

I still just love the sound of that collage.  And isn't it handy that it's hanging in the bedroom?

I'm glad for the happy JAM ending!  Off to see the epilogue! 



Author's Response:

yeah, it probably is a bit to neat. oh well.

hehe, well, pam did look at it when she was lonely... at night... in her bedroom :). not that i am suggesting anything at all!!!! 

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