Date: April 19, 2008 06:22 am Title: I thought how nice it'd be
Like how Pam's moods change with the letters. Some more lighthearted than others...
Date: February 23, 2008 01:43 am Title: I thought how nice it'd be
Aww I love how Marsha is sneaking around looking for letters. Heehee! Pam's letters are so heartfelt (the opening greeting and closing line of that first one was just priceless!!).
10 [Report This]Date: January 20, 2008 02:12 pm Title: I thought how nice it'd be
I realize that this is "old" but I just had to say this:
The anticipation Marsha felt about having those letters in her pocket is the same that I feel when I'm waiting for another of your chapters to load.
Um... I think that was my first official review, although I've been squealing and cursing at others for many, many months!
Author's Response:
Thanks, larajane! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! And it's awesome that this is your first review! I feel so special now! ;) Thanks again! I'm pretty partial to this story myself, so no matter how old it gets, it's always fun to hear that someone's still having fun reading it!
Date: April 09, 2007 04:06 pm Title: I thought how nice it'd be
aww, I love this story. You really captured how people no doubt feel when they're watching the show. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it.
Date: April 04, 2007 11:44 am Title: I thought how nice it'd be
I love this story. So far I'm not having any trouble knowing what is a letter and what isn't, but italics would probably be clearer than double spacing.
Author's Response: Yeah. I'll probably switch over to italics at some point. Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!
Date: March 30, 2007 02:46 pm Title: I thought how nice it'd be
I think the format is fine; no problem. Italics would be fine, too. (Aren't I helpful?) To paraphrase Pam in the Merger "That's totally cool. You can do what you want."
Marsha fell asleep musing on Pam and Jim and how to get them together. Is she crazy? Can you imagine someone doing such a thing? Oh, right... us. And in our case, they're actually fictional, so... yeah.
For some reason, I'm picturing Madge (from the warehouse) as Marsha. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Madge: Interesting. Not really the image I had in mind, but I realize I've been keeping her appearance really vague. Not exactly sure why I'm doing that.
Thanks for the review!
10 [Report This]Date: March 30, 2007 02:41 pm Title: I thought how nice it'd be
Hmm...that might be good (the italics, I mean). I did get a little confused in this chapter where the letter ended. Great job, btw.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm still undecided on the italics issue. Maybe I'll just try it next time and see what I think.
Date: March 30, 2007 05:48 am Title: I thought how nice it'd be
I can always tell what the letters are, but I think that italics may make it more notiable faster.
and then, this is just getting better and better. i love the idea of looking in jims trash. and she should find something. and then give the others letters to them. and then happy jam.
okay, its your story, you write it since you are doing a great job!
Author's Response: I'm so addicted to these letters. I can't seem to stop writing them. However, there is more to the story and it's coming eventually, and with it the happy jam!
Date: March 29, 2007 11:57 pm Title: I thought how nice it'd be
I really am enjoying this. I think the letters are totally characteristic of Pam. Well done. And Marsha is so sweet.
Your present format isn't at all confusing, but italics might be nice.
Loving this!
Author's Response:
Aw, shucks! I'm so glad you think Pam's letters are in character. I've been worried about that. Thanks for the review!
Date: March 29, 2007 11:23 pm Title: I thought how nice it'd be
I'm really into this and it technically only has one character.
Good Job!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it.