Date: April 19, 2008 06:29 am Title: I watched you asleep
No, no...it does seem like it is going somewhere. I really like seeing Jim/Pam's relationship from the perspective of someone who has never met them. This is good.
Date: February 23, 2008 01:49 am Title: I watched you asleep
LOL she called Pam? What a little stalker! Haha I love it. Oh no, Pam threw away the post-it? That's sad, I hope she gets it back if Marsha ever decides to return the letters. These letters are getting more and more personal...I really like hearing Pam's thoughts, they're probably really close to what she was actually feeling last season. *sigh*
Date: June 09, 2007 05:47 pm Title: I watched you asleep
I just LOVE reading these chapters!!!!
Author's Response: Oh good! I'm glad you're enjoying them!
Date: April 05, 2007 02:38 am Title: I watched you asleep
I'm really loving this fic! It's such a unique idea! There's a lack of response for it at TWoP? That's a shame. I hope you can find a person to beta, although, you're doing great on your own! Hardly any grammar mistakes. I do think you need to italicize the letters, though. Just to make it a little bit easier to differentiate between the letters. =) Please write fast!
Author's Response: Well, the lack of response comment was referring to the fact that I wanted a beta and I wanted it right then! And so when I didn't get one I pouted and then posted anyway. I'm a very emotional updater I've realized. But anyways, I'm glad you're liking it and I think you're right about the italics so look for those in the next chapter.
Date: April 04, 2007 11:17 pm Title: I watched you asleep
I'm really enjoying this. Hooray for nosy cleaning ladies! I hope she delivers the letters to Jim, or--even better--doesn't have to because Pam finally confesses her feelings. But of course given the POV, it'd have to happen through Marsha's actions or we wouldn't know about it. :)
Very nice job. I love the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad to hear that I'm not the only person who loves this story. Sometimes I feel like a total dork for liking my own story so much. Anyways, yes I can definitively say that Marsha will have something to do with them getting together, but I won't say anything else. Yet.
Date: April 04, 2007 05:32 pm Title: I watched you asleep
I feel quite certain it's going somewhere, and I can't wait to see where.
Author's Response: I can promise you'll find out the general direction pretty soon. Sorry if that was vague, but...well... you'll see what I mean! I'm glad you like it.
10 [Report This]Date: April 04, 2007 05:23 pm Title: I watched you asleep
I'm really excited to see where this is going! Great job so far!
Author's Response: Thank you! I actually had time to write today, so you shouldn't have to wait too long to find out.
Date: April 04, 2007 12:07 pm Title: I watched you asleep
It really is a good and believable view into what's going on with Pam during all of this. I do hope Marsha does something soon though!
Author's Response:
Oh, she will! :) Glad you like it!
Date: April 04, 2007 11:47 am Title: I watched you asleep
This totally does not feel like it is going nowhere! I am so enjoying learning about Jim and Pam with Martha. But I hope Martha finds something soon (perhaps a clue to Jim's feelings on his desk... or something) that makes her act.
This is totally fun!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it. I have a really fun idea for how to keep going with it, so stay tuned.
Date: April 04, 2007 11:42 am Title: I watched you asleep
Me again. I invoked Marsha and your story in my review of Girly-Girl chapter 45 (I think). Thought I should tell you!
Author's Response: Wow, really? I feel famous now. *scurries off to check it out*
Date: April 04, 2007 11:09 am Title: I watched you asleep
Aww. Poor Pam. And I can't believe Marsha got up the nerve to call (even if she did hang up)! Man, I'm hoping that someday Marsha just leaves a file with all the letters on Jim's desk. Hmm. But how would she explain that it wasn't Pam leaving them?
I'm really enjoying this story. However you envision it continuing, I'm definitely along for the ride!
Author's Response:
Don't worry. There is a plan. And if I do say so myself, it's a pretty good one. Or at least, I think it's good, which probably means it's crap, but whatever because it's my story so I get to do whatever I want with it.
In the meantime, I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Date: April 04, 2007 10:13 am Title: I watched you asleep
Azlin I'm really liking this and I can't wait to see where you're headed with this! If you ever need a beta you can always contact me! :) So now I"ll just sit here and wait........
*patiently awaiting more*
Author's Response: Seriously? Because I'll definitely be taking you up on that offer. Beta's are my new favorite thing in the whole world. Glad you're liking it!
Date: April 04, 2007 09:51 am Title: I watched you asleep
I love this. If I had beta'd it, I wouldn't have found anything wrong. It's perfect (much like Kelly in the Dumpster). I'm perfectly happy at the pace of the story.
(Ooh, I just found something. Is the post it there or not? You don't say. It's not an error, or anything, but just something people (well, I) might wonder about.)
I love Pam's letters. I do wonder what Marsha might do. How can she find out whether Jim would welcome the letters? Hmm. I await further information. (Doesn't that sound like something Dwight might say?)
Any clues in Jim's trash? Karen's?
Author's Response:
You know, I should've caught that about the post-it. But now that I think about it, and since I don't think I'll mention it in later chapters, here's what happened: Since the post-it is so old, the sticky part wasn't sticky anymore, and so the post-it got mixed in with everything else in Pam's garbage and Marsha didn't think it was anything important when she was going through Pam's trash looking for letters so now the post-it is gone forever. The end.
As for everything else, you'll just have to wait and see. I like the speculation, though, it encouages me to try to keep surprising you. So stay tuned.
Date: April 04, 2007 09:38 am Title: I watched you asleep
<3
Author's Response:
:) ;)
Date: April 04, 2007 09:36 am Title: I watched you asleep
Um, yeah, so as a joke, I started a countdown clock until Thursday night. And then i just left it up. So, I think I am rather pathetic for knowing that as of this writing, it is exactly 113319 seconds (give to take a commercial) until the start of the new episode.
I didn't notice the lack of a beta, so thats good.
And I really enjoyed this chapter, because it was a very good outsiders view of The Office as a whole, with Karen involved, and the mention of Kevin.
I am enjoying this story, and I can't wait to see where it goes
Author's Response:
That's sooo cool! I wish I was that technically savvy. And you're not at all pathetic. The pathetic part comes in when you start calculating it by hand... not that I would know from experience or anything.
Uh... anyways, glad you're enjoying the story!