1 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2021 11:20 pm Title: just as I find my footing
This is so great
Date: April 19, 2008 06:44 am Title: just as I find my footing
hmmm, I am wondering about Jim's angry(?confused?) reaction. What will he do now??
This is great, Azlin!
Date: February 23, 2008 02:02 am Title: just as I find my footing
Heehee the first letter was so adorable (and such a girl thing to write! lol). Oooh interesting twist that Jim has to write letters back...but knowing that Marsha will read them makes it just a bit creepy. Haha! Can't wait to find out what Jim does. =)
Date: November 17, 2007 03:28 pm Title: just as I find my footing
And the chapter titles are lyrics from DMB's Dreamgirl! I can't tell you how much I love Pam writing herself a letter from Jim! So wonderful!
Date: April 09, 2007 09:42 pm Title: just as I find my footing
Okay, yeah, I'd have been a little spooked by Marsha, too. But her spookiness is overshadowed by the fact that she's doing a good thing. She's a benevolent spook. ;)
Author's Response: Yeah, her heart's in the right place...mostly...I think. Thanks for the review!
Date: April 09, 2007 04:56 pm Title: just as I find my footing
This is stressful lol.
Author's Response: Sorry. Well, I'm not sorry enough to stop writing but I am a little sorry. ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: April 09, 2007 04:21 pm Title: just as I find my footing
Awesome! I'm sooooo glad that Jim finally knows and I loved how you wrote his reaction--of course he would appreciate more of Pam's letters!! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm kind of relieved that Jim knows too, but it's also going to make everything more complicated from now on so... yeah.
10 [Report This]Date: April 09, 2007 04:13 pm Title: just as I find my footing
So I just spent the afternoon falling in love with this story! So sweet, and Martha is such a great character. I can just picture her. I am DYING to see what happens next. The sweetness is just pouring out of this story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like it. And thanks for the rec at TwoP! It made me smile really big.
Date: April 09, 2007 02:54 pm Title: just as I find my footing
Oooh - the intrique is increasing!! Yay!
Something tells me he'll be contacting Marsha soon...
Author's Response: Yes. Intrigue! And that something that's telling you things, just might be right.
Date: April 09, 2007 01:53 pm Title: just as I find my footing
Oh! Yay! This is getting exciting! Although i think I'd be a little freaked if I were Jim, He had better leave Marsha a letter! (God, I am talking about him like he;s a real person... I'm constantly doing that these days...)
Loving this!
Author's Response: No worries desert island, happens to the best of us! ;) Thanks for the review.
Date: April 09, 2007 12:18 pm Title: just as I find my footing
I'm glad that you added that bit to the end as well -- although now I have to say that Marsha has come off as a bit creepy, demanding letters from Jim! It's sort of like she's blackmailing him. If I was Jim, I would have walked away, too.
I find this interesting now because, in a way, it reveals a bit of narrator bias on the part of Marsha. No longer is she just a neutral observer in these letters that Pam's writing to Jim, she's now an active participant in a scheme not only to reveal Pam's feelings, but to also make herself feel better, which is a bit sinister in a way. Very interesting!
Can't wait to read more of this. Keep sending it my way!!
Author's Response:
Okay. Will do. /Jim
Check your email sometime tomorrow or possibly late tonight!
Date: April 09, 2007 12:06 pm Title: just as I find my footing
This story has taken a really interesting turn. I can see the situation from Marsha's POV as well as Jim being creeped out by what could be (for all he knows) a potentially psycho stalker. But I think the curiousity/desire to know what Pam is thinking will win out with Jim. If he turns Marsha in to her employer, he will get no more Pam letters. If he says anything to Pam, she'll flip out and he will get no more letters from Marsha. If he doesn't leave Marsha any letters to Pam...Marsha will deliver no more letters from Pam. So I think Jim will ultimately start writing.
Man, I can't wait to read more...this is one of my favorite stories going...one I stalk MTT for updates. More, please!
Author's Response: What? I have my own stalker? That is so cool!! As for all your speculation, you'll just have to wait and see...
Date: April 09, 2007 11:53 am Title: just as I find my footing
Oh Jim. Listen to Marsha please. She knows what she's talking about - even if she's creeping you out telling you she likes to sort through your garbage. :)
Author's Response:
Lol! I'll pass the message along to Jim. ;)
Date: April 09, 2007 11:15 am Title: just as I find my footing
I love how the meeting with Jim went. And what a good choice of a note to show him and whet his appetite. (Hey, there's no TWSS in there; don't try to find one.)
I'm really enjoying this so much!
Author's Response: Oh good! I'm so glad you're enjoying it. And don't think, with all the beta loving and shout-outs going on that I haven't forgotten my very first reviewer. You still rock, Kev --Signed, the author formerly known as the other Kev.
Date: April 09, 2007 11:15 am Title: just as I find my footing
YAY! I take a break from homework, check MTT, and guess what I see....Well, I am pretty sure you can guess. But, it was an Garbage update. Hehe!!! Wait, that sounds offensive.. :P
Haha, I love how honest she is - I'll read them! Of course.
Haha! I loved your chapter notes!!! Made me smile. Now I can go do chemistry happily (wait - is that possible? chemistry? happy? same sentence? NEVER). But I can be happy while I walk the one foot to my chem book. That is enough for me!
Author's Response: Anything to keep you happy for one more foot. ;)
Date: April 09, 2007 10:55 am Title: just as I find my footing
This is such an intriguing premise -- I am dying to see how this all works out.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it.
Date: April 09, 2007 10:49 am Title: just as I find my footing
haha I'm so glad that you decided to add that extra bit at the end! It makes it feel more complete and adds a better tension! That Marsha sure has some courage! Maybe she should spread the wealth to Pam. Just saying.
I can't wait to see if Jim'll leave letters too! If I were Jim I'd be a little creeped out by her too. :)
If you need more help.... I'm always around! Great job Azlin!! :) Look forward to more greatness!
Author's Response: Greatness? insert a Kevin-style snort here. Any greatness is entirely due to your excellent beta-ing skills. :)