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Reviewer: support_the_rabid Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2008 07:03 am Title: I was feeling like a creep

Dammit, Jim. Sign your name to your letters. And don't misinterpret Pam's lengthy letter about her feelings about the kiss. Jeez!

(great job as usual)

Reviewer: FinerThings Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23, 2008 02:15 am Title: I was feeling like a creep

Haha the Jim/Kelly/tampon incident sounds hilarious. And I loved re-reading one of those earlier letters with Jim's thoughts added. That was a really nice touch. And again, the dreamgirl letters are adorable, that was such a good idea! =)

Reviewer: Sweetpea Signed [Report This]
Date: November 17, 2007 03:47 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

She drifted off to sleep imagining herself as Pam. Young and pretty, with enough time left in her life to fix her mistakes.

Good Lord, that kicked me dead square in the grief bone.  Great chapter, loved Jim's inner thoughts as he read Pam's letter - spot-on Halpert.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09, 2007 06:20 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

Great!  Great!  Great!

Author's Response: Thanks! Thanks! Thanks!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20, 2007 11:57 am Title: I was feeling like a creep

So, so sweet. Stupid Marsha needs to give Jim the mushy letters, though! Hee.



Author's Response:

Thanks! And I promise the mushy letters will come to Jim eventually. ;)

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 09:45 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

she's starting to figure it out! yes!!! updates soon please?!

Author's Response: Cute name! I'll try to have the next chapter up by Monday or Tuesday. Hope that's soon enough! Thanks for the review! ;)

Reviewer: invis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 07:33 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

Hooray for a new chapter!  I'm enjoying the story.  :)


Author's Response: Thanks I'm really glad to hear that! ;) I'm really enjoying Practical Jokes!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 05:29 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

Yeah new chapter! I can't wait until Jim gets one of the ones that's a true "love" letter! What will his reaction be?

Author's Response:

You'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: time4moxie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 03:54 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

more, more, more!!  I want to get to the part where they figure it all out!  :-)

There. Now you know how I feel when people keep poking me for more Squirrel!  ;-)    I really do love this story, though - so I am anxious to read more! 



Author's Response:

I have so much more respect for you now! And I'm sorry about any poking I may have done in the past. But I promise the good stuff is coming soon! ;)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 02:27 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

Interesting.  Even with these letters, Jim's still confused! 

And poor Marsha - even the letters aren't making her happier about her life.  Maybe she needs to write some letters to people in her life, not just read letters which others have written!

And Pam... basketball?  Major clue, dear! 

But Azlin, you need to leave your "bad" ending somewhere, maybe as an epilogue! 



Author's Response: I don't know. I think the bad ending had it's moment in the sunshine and needs to be put to rest. But we'll see. Great spec on the Marsha front! That's actually pretty close to what's about to happen.

Reviewer: desert island Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 01:17 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

Can't wait for Marsha to give Jim some meatier letters... Although it just kills me how dense he is, cause that last one was pretty meaty. :)
Enjoying this a ton!

Author's Response: Marsha giving Jim meatier letters....hm...now why didn't I think of that? Just kidding. I promise it's coming soon!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 01:07 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

Pam is reading Jim's letters!!!!  YAY!!!  I cannot wait to see what comes of THAT!  Will she figure out what they are supposed to be?  Will be have another McPants where Jim has to come clean for snooping on Pam?  This is getting goood, Azlin!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it! ;)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 12:48 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

Aww, no more bad!fic ending... I guess I will just have to let this work.
This was great. A short review because I have a quiz in 2 hours. but great installment. now time to study.

Author's Response: Thanks! Good luck on your quiz!

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed [Report This]
Date: April 19, 2007 12:36 pm Title: I was feeling like a creep

This is such a great, ambitious story, and the letters are so well done.  I have to admit, though, that I think the table has been set for the payoff for a little while now and I could see myself getting a little less invested if it's deferred for many more chapters.  That may just be my impatient nature, though.  I'm also finding it a little hard to suspend my disbelief that Jim wouldn't act on these letters in some way.  I'm still a big, big fan though.

 



Author's Response: I know. And I'm sorry if it feels like it's been dragging. I think a lot of people are getting frustrated with that aspect of this story--including me. But I promise if you'll stick with it for just a little bit longer it's about to get a lot more interesting. Thanks for the review!

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