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Reviewer: MaiaDawn Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

oh!  You and your darn cliff hangers!  I know I have been enjoying the Ryan/Pam thing, but I'm seriously ready for some JAM in the house!

Okay, and can I just express my LOVE for that particular speech in Independence Day?  That's the speech that made me a Bill Pullman fan!  So cheesy, yet so priceless...



Author's Response: YES that speech is priceless, for realsies.  My favorite bit of that movie is when they cut to the "Brits" who are finding out that America has come up with a plan and they're like "Its about bloody time!" Like, of course America has to think up the plan to save the world and all the other countries are just waiting around to hear what it is, hahha.  

Reviewer: rainy01 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 09:10 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

Okay, now I'm not sure anymore who I'm hoping for Pam to hook up with. I've been gunning for some Pam/Ryan loving since about chapter 2, but angry sex with jealous angry Jim could be pretty hot, too. Of course, then he would be cheating on Karen and I'd have to bring back that finger I reserved just for him during the Never have I ever game. Ahh, I'm so conflicted! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Haha, yes I think both scenarios would be hot!  Don't worry, you'll find out today ;)

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 09:07 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

I LOVE Dwight and Angela!! So sweet...Oh, and the next chapter needs to be up in the next five minutes. I'm serious.


Author's Response: Hee!  It will definitely be up this afternoon, I promise!

Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:53 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

OMGOMGOMG.

next up?... the reason why I rated this story "explicit"

OMGOMGOMG.

Jim wanting to kick the bartender's ass, and Pam doing the (verbal) ass kicking herself - awesome. And of course the snarky movie banter and the use of the last names between Ryan and Pam would SO drive Jim over the edge (as opposed to Ryan and Pam making out.) Because that's a Jim/Pam thing (like when Pam was crushed to see Jim and Karen pulling pranks.)

*sigh* 

But I really think it will be Angela's comment, "I think you are about to upset the very delicate balance of this office," that will make Pam reexamine this whole Ryan thing. 'Course I could be totally wrong.

Whatever. I stalk MTT looking for updates to this fic. More, pretty please? 



Author's Response: More tomorrow!  I guarantee it ;) Thanks for pointing out all the bits that you liked (yes, I think Pam and Ryan using the last names would just send Jim into a tizzy) Thanks again!!

Reviewer: JRAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:51 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

OK what were you thinking ending it there???????

 

Please update SOON--I can't wait to see what happens next!!

 

 



Author's Response: Ahh! I'm sorry! I promise promise more tomorrow :)

Reviewer: Emmypie Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:49 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

I love the story. haha, I love how much they drink.

Author's Response: I know, right?  I should totally rename this story "Drunkards on a Boat"  THanks!

Reviewer: fasterthansnakes Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

God, Jim is killing me in this story. I feel for him so much. I just finished watching the first season and man his life sucked so hard. Now to watch the woman he loves flaunt how much she doesn't want him anymore part deux?! I mean come on, he already put it out there, twice, with Pam so ready to 'move on' again why would he do it again? I would tell Jim to forget it that it isn't worth it, but the sad thing is that he isn't ever moving on. Gah. 

 



Author's Response: Well, at least he's got drunk Karen to comfort him ;)

Reviewer: chicagolights Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Hold on, its gonna be a bumpy one

Ryan is sexy when he's drunk. Yowza. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Sigh.. yes, Ryan is sexy :) More tomorrow!

Reviewer: JinRain Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:48 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

You're doing a great job with this story! I'm a major Jim/Pam fan, but, I can totally live with the Pam/Ryan direction because it is so well done. I really just want to bitch-slap Jim here (although I would never refuse a little JAM action, ahem). Thanks for writing one hell of an addicting story.



Author's Response: Thank you! That is awesome to hear, especially since you are a major JAM fan!  :)

Reviewer: lama Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:43 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

"Okay, so, next up?... the reason why I rated this story "explicit" so... yeah. I'm a bit nervous :)"

Thank you!  I know now not to read the next chapter at work!  And huminah huminah holy wah wah woo.  I guess the figure walking toward Pam could be either Jim or Ryan, each marked by their height (or lack thereof)  I will be quietly waiting and DYING for the next chapter.   



Author's Response: It will definitely be up tomorrow, and thank you!!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:40 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

Ok, the Independence Day & Armegeddon bit is freaking hilarious!  (HooHusband has a knack for finding Armegeddon on cable any time, day or night, it's spooky!)

And DMCP totally putting the bartender in his place -- dawesome!  

Finally -- I cannot BELIEVE you ended this chapter there, and THEN you go & tease us with the promise of smut!  After all I've done for you!!! 



Author's Response: Haha, Armageddon is ALWAYS on! And yet, I always watch it.  It's a sickness.  I promise the smut will be up tomorrow,  I would never want to let you down lisahoo! :)

Reviewer: GreenFish Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:39 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

Are you fucking KIDDING me?  I hate you right now!  I was totally hoping to get some secks-u-al resolution here!  And who is it??  Jim?  Ryan?   OMG, the suspense is killing me!

I also love how you completely captured the drunken stream-of-consciousness conversations that happen when you've had a few too many.  Also?  Dwight Schrute is a really, really cute drunk!  Ah!  I can't believe I just said that, but I'm convinced that he is now!  

(I kind of see Drunk!Dwight as a less delirious version of himself in The Injury.  "Awwww... Pam."  Hee.)

OK, seriously.  Bring on the smut.  I will take anything.  You're looking at a desperate woman here.  



Author's Response: I thought concussion Dwight was so adorable that now that is pretty much how I picture him drunk :) I'm sorry that I left it hanging, but I promise it'll be worth it!! (I hope, haha)

Reviewer: betterthanparis Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:38 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

I'm kind of new to fanfic but I just have to say I love Hey Jealousy! By far my favorite! I love Dwight offering to 'take care of' Bill!  <>

 

I can't wait to see the next chapter! 



Author's Response: Thank you! That is so great to hear, the next chapter will be up tomorrow, cross my heart :)

Reviewer: quietdecember Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:36 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW

You so conquered Drunk!Dwight (a formidable challenge to be sure :D), presidential speeches, Angela buying garlic, aaaaaaaaaa, and you should be writing Karen for the show.

HA! suck on that halpert! 

The picture is awesome.

good job! 



Author's Response: Thank you for that dawesome review!!  I'm so glad you liked drunk!Dwight, hee!

Reviewer: aaliokulta Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:33 pm Title: Sparkling cider is very good.

Oh, oh, oh! Who is it?? Frodo or Jim?? I'm all aquiver! Hehe.

I got embarassingly excited when I saw that you updated. My boyfriend gave me a 'look'...

I love the bit with Ryan kissing her in front of Jim (damn, what did they talk about in that bathroom?!) and Karen going all high school about the tongue. It was great! :) I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Hehe thank you so much!  I'm glad you are excited about it and the next chapter will definitely be up tomorrow :)

Reviewer: flamingosinparadise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 08:19 pm Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

Holy frickin crap!  What went on in that bathroom??  What is going on with Jim??  This whole story is just too frickin good and I cannot believe a tiny tiny part of me is rooting for Pam & Ryan (just in the story, not the show) but I love that Jim is jealous and that Dwight and Angela have admited it.  Wonderful wonderful.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You'll find out soon I promise ;)

Reviewer: UrkelGrue Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 07:36 pm Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

Ah! I'm going insane! I need more!
I HAVE to know what happens!

Author's Response: Hee, thank you!  Ask and ye shall receive ;)

Reviewer: archychick Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 04:47 pm Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

I would like you to know that I signed up for an MTT account specifically to comment on this fic.  I love it.  I love everything about it.  Seriously.  Awesome. 

It has also made me realize that as much of a JAMshipper as I am, I think I am moreso a pamshipper - I just want her to be happy, and if Ryan is the one to get her there so be it!  What are we calling them?  pryan?



Author's Response: Wow, thank you!  I really appreciate that you went to all the trouble! I am definitely a Pam shipper myself, she just needs some happiness in her life, no matter who its with :)

Reviewer: Luna Mystik Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 03:59 pm Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

Wow, this is getting *really* interesting. I can't wait to read whether Pam was feeling relief or disappointment. I certainly would be done wanting Jim after this outing.

Author's Response: Me either ;) Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Weetzie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 02:44 pm Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

First of all, my reaction to updates of this has evolved from excited to realived. Today kind of sucked and this made it all better. This may be my favorite chapter so far. Ryan is so dreamy, Michael asked Stanley to sing "Ebony and Ivory", drunk Dwight is so sweet, I love Karen and Pam as friends(why could the writers not have gone this route?). I am really curious what Jim said to Ryan though in the bathroom (in the adjoining urinals!). Ok, I've written too much. Awesome job as usual!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that I could somehow help your sucky day! Hopefully I'll have more up tonight/early tomorrow :)

Reviewer: whynot Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 01:32 pm Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

I just registered on the site so I could let you know how much I'm enjoying this story!  I don't know why I was so surprised that it was Jim who found Pam & Ryan and not Karen, but I was, and it was great!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks!  That's so cool that you registered, I really really appreciate your comment :) Hope to hear from you again!

Reviewer: Spookster831 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 12:18 pm Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

Hee I now I actually want Pam and Ryan to get together.

 Dwight and Angela are so cute!  And so are Michael and Jan.

And Mulder and Scully did get together on the X-Files! ;)  Or was Dwight just exceedingly drunk?



Author's Response: Just exceedingly drunk ;) I'll clarify in the next chapter for sure!  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: falldownmore Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 11:51 am Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

SDGHFDFGHJ. :D


Author's Response: Thanks! hehe :)

Reviewer: fireworkfiasco Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 10:38 am Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

UMMM. I don't know what to say because this chapter has basically blown my mind. It's so...perfect, really, how she's finding herself through someone who isn't Jim and isn't Roy and is outside her "norm". Wonderful, wonderful.

Seriously, don't listen to anyone but me (and bennie, i guess) and just keep doing your thang. Don't mess with perfection, in other words. Thanks? Thanks. :D



Author's Response: Hee, I will definitely keep listening to you guys!  You are so great, seriously, so thank YOU fwf!  And can I mention that you're newest completely MADE my day??? Loved every word. 

Reviewer: DunderSnob Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: April 02, 2007 10:09 am Title: I just don't want it to be weird... you know?

I just read this for the first time..!! The Ryan thing is kinda freeking me out at the moment, but I trust you. I can trust you right?

Author's Response: Well, I make no promises but hopefully you will continue to read anyways ;)

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